Susan's Hidden Jungle - READY! - POLL ADDED! - 7/25/16
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Re: Susan's Hidden Jungle - READY! - LAST UPDATE! - 7/22/16
Great Job, Six Guns! Splendid work as always. Had me in suspense all through the story! I look forward to your next work!
Tarzan to Jill Hardy: Girl be still. Not sink!!"
From "Valley Of Mystery" : Don't struggle and do not thrash around; that just makes things worse!
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From "Valley Of Mystery" : Don't struggle and do not thrash around; that just makes things worse!
Also: check me out at:
http://mudmaiden.deviantart.com/gallery/
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Re: Susan's Hidden Jungle - READY! - LAST UPDATE! - 7/22/16
Awesome job!!!! Really love the backgrounds.
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Re: Susan's Hidden Jungle - READY! - LAST UPDATE! - 7/22/16
I shall add my voice to the chorus of thanks and love for your work here. Well done! I really enjoyed that!
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Re: Susan's Hidden Jungle - READY! - LAST UPDATE! - 7/22/16
I'm really glad you guys enjoyed it! And thank you so much for your kind words and for taking a moment to leave a reply! It really does mean a lot. Especially you guys who replied repeatedly throughout the whole thing. You rock!
How long did Tarzan watch before deciding to save Jill..?
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Re: Susan's Hidden Jungle - READY! - POLL ADDED! - 7/25/16
I went back and added a poll to the first page. Yeah, it's a sad little attempt to generate some feedback (again, thank you sooooo much to the folks who have already responded!) but I really would like to know what people thought. Did you like it? Did you not like it? Why? What was your favorite/least favorite part? I figured a poll was the simplest way. Thanks in advance!
How long did Tarzan watch before deciding to save Jill..?
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Re: Susan's Hidden Jungle - READY! - POLL ADDED! - 7/25/16
Okay to answer my dodgy vote of 'Least favorite: Other.' is simple. There was nothing wrong with this story or the presentation. I don't even have anything against the ending either. It's just my preference that uh... the mud wins. And you wanted to know what my least favorite part was. I wouldn't want you to change anything about the story.
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Re: Susan's Hidden Jungle - READY! - POLL ADDED! - 7/25/16
Stephymink wrote:Okay to answer my dodgy vote of 'Least favorite: Other.' is simple. There was nothing wrong with this story or the presentation. I don't even have anything against the ending either. It's just my preference that uh... the mud wins. And you wanted to know what my least favorite part was. I wouldn't want you to change anything about the story.
Thank you for taking the time to answer! I do, indeed, want to know. And I don't think it's dodgy at all, lol. It's a legitimate preference. Typically, I like to save my damsels but I have been known (on rare occasions) to let the mud win. I even have a couple such scenarios in mind currently. I won't change this part of the story but I will direct your attention to the 'To be continued' at the bottom of the last frame...
How long did Tarzan watch before deciding to save Jill..?
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Re: Susan's Hidden Jungle - READY! - POLL ADDED! - 7/25/16
Stephymink wrote:Okay to answer my dodgy vote of 'Least favorite: Other.' is simple. There was nothing wrong with this story or the presentation. I don't even have anything against the ending either. It's just my preference that uh... the mud wins. And you wanted to know what my least favorite part was. I wouldn't want you to change anything about the story.
Ditto. I envy the women who go under.
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