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Re: New Depths: The Art of Writing Quicksand Stories

Posted: Sun Apr 13, 2014 2:18 pm
by schlamm
The use of an incorrect variation of a word is also a huge irritant....at least to me, anyways.

"She could here the sound of branches braking in the distance, she had failed to loose her pursuers despite the lose, sandy trail " :roll:

Obviously spell check finds nothing wrong with the above ridiculous statement, sadly, I do not believe there is an "intelligence check" as of yet.
Commonly misapplied words:
to ~ two ~ too
their ~ there ~ they're
loose ~ lose
brake ~ break
affect ~ effect
complement ~ compliment
stationary ~ stationery
insure ~ ensure ~ assure
then ~ than
weather ~ whether
Its ~ It's
accept ~ except
farther ~ further
lightening ~ lightning
alright ~ all right....alright is not even a recognized word
and finally, the one that just makes my skin crawl......prolly ~ probably

Re: New Depths: The Art of Writing Quicksand Stories

Posted: Sun Apr 13, 2014 2:39 pm
by Fred588
Hmmm, the lose trail must lead to a casino. Her pursuers were left tied up? The branches were simply going too fast and had to stop really fast, and I can visualize her turning one ear and then the other to localize where they were. I can also visualize a very large poison ivy plant.LOL

schlamm wrote:The use of an incorrect variation of a word is also a huge irritant....at least to me, anyways.

"She could here the sound of branches braking in the distance, she had failed to loose her pursuers despite the lose, sandy trail " :roll:

Obviously spell check finds nothing wrong with the above ridiculous statement, sadly, I do not believe there is an "intelligence check" as of yet.
Commonly misapplied words:
to ~ two ~ too
their ~ there ~ they're
loose ~ lose
brake ~ break
affect ~ effect
complement ~ compliment
stationary ~ stationery
insure ~ ensure ~ assure
then ~ than
weather ~ whether
Its ~ It's
accept ~ except
farther ~ further
lightening ~ lightning
alright ~ all right....alright is not even a recognized word
and finally, the one that just makes my skin crawl......prolly ~ probably

Re: New Depths: The Art of Writing Quicksand Stories

Posted: Sun Apr 13, 2014 8:29 pm
by PM2K
schlamm wrote:The use of an incorrect variation of a word is also a huge irritant....at least to me, anyways.

"She could here the sound of branches braking in the distance, she had failed to loose her pursuers despite the lose, sandy trail " :roll:

Obviously spell check finds nothing wrong with the above ridiculous statement, sadly, I do not believe there is an "intelligence check" as of yet.
Commonly misapplied words:
to ~ two ~ too
their ~ there ~ they're
loose ~ lose
brake ~ break
affect ~ effect
complement ~ compliment
stationary ~ stationery
insure ~ ensure ~ assure
then ~ than
weather ~ whether
Its ~ It's
accept ~ except
farther ~ further
lightening ~ lightning
alright ~ all right....alright is not even a recognized word
and finally, the one that just makes my skin crawl......prolly ~ probably


Agreed!

Re: New Depths: The Art of Writing Quicksand Stories

Posted: Sun Apr 13, 2014 8:53 pm
by Lomax
schlamm wrote:The use of an incorrect variation of a word is also a huge irritant....at least to me, anyways.

"She could here the sound of branches braking in the distance, she had failed to loose her pursuers despite the lose, sandy trail " :roll:

Obviously spell check finds nothing wrong with the above ridiculous statement, sadly, I do not believe there is an "intelligence check" as of yet.
Commonly misapplied words:
to ~ two ~ too
their ~ there ~ they're
loose ~ lose
brake ~ break
affect ~ effect
complement ~ compliment
stationary ~ stationery
insure ~ ensure ~ assure
then ~ than
weather ~ whether
Its ~ It's
accept ~ except
farther ~ further
lightening ~ lightning
alright ~ all right....alright is not even a recognized word
and finally, the one that just makes my skin crawl......prolly ~ probably


You omit people who write "Could of" instead of "Could have." Frankly, I think that one should carry the death penalty.

Re: New Depths: The Art of Writing Quicksand Stories

Posted: Sun Apr 13, 2014 9:04 pm
by Fred588
Mistakes of this type have a lot of causes, of which lack of knowledge of language and/or spelling is probably prime. There are others though. I know I make more mistakes now than I used to and an important reason is that my vision has become rather poor and it has become very hard to read what I have written on a computer screen.

Re: New Depths: The Art of Writing Quicksand Stories

Posted: Sun Apr 13, 2014 11:26 pm
by schlamm
You omit people who write "Could of" instead of "Could have." Frankly, I think that one should carry the death penalty.

You are absolutely correct, Lomax,
"Alright, prolly could of included that two" ;)

Re: New Depths: The Art of Writing Quicksand Stories

Posted: Mon Apr 14, 2014 8:03 am
by Boggy Man
Another annoying writing "faux pas" is the use of texting abbreviations/shorthand/acronyms.

Re: New Depths: The Art of Writing Quicksand Stories

Posted: Mon Apr 14, 2014 9:53 am
by Lomax
Fred588 wrote:My vision has become rather poor and it has become very hard to read what I have written on a computer screen.


Sorry to hear that, Fred.

Me, I was born functionally blind in one eye, meaning that I have very limited depth perception (when I was a kid, learning to catch a ball was a trial, and my efforts exposed me to much mockery) - and 3D cinema is a closed world to me.

In later life, my other eye (possibly over-burdened) has deteriorated - though in the opposite way to yours. I can see this screen fine; but without glasses I have difficulty working out what's across the street.

Worse; I have passed some dodgy DNA to my sons (why couldn't they have inherited their mother's eyesight, dammit?), all of whom have needed glasses from a young age.

Re: New Depths: The Art of Writing Quicksand Stories

Posted: Mon Apr 14, 2014 10:03 am
by Lomax
schlamm wrote:Obviously spell check finds nothing wrong with the above ridiculous statement...



I have a spelling chequer
It reeds righting four me
And indicates for my revue
Mistakes I can knot sea.

I've run this poem threw it
Sow that I'm shore to no:
It's letter perfect all the weigh -
My chequer tolled me sew.

Re: New Depths: The Art of Writing Quicksand Stories

Posted: Mon Apr 14, 2014 9:03 pm
by Fred588
Lomax wrote:
Fred588 wrote:My vision has become rather poor and it has become very hard to read what I have written on a computer screen.


Sorry to hear that, Fred.

Me, I was born functionally blind in one eye, meaning that I have very limited depth perception (when I was a kid, learning to catch a ball was a trial, and my efforts exposed me to much mockery) - and 3D cinema is a closed world to me.

In later life, my other eye (possibly over-burdened) has deteriorated - though in the opposite way to yours. I can see this screen fine; but without glasses I have difficulty working out what's across the street.

Worse; I have passed some dodgy DNA to my sons (why couldn't they have inherited their mother's eyesight, dammit?), all of whom have needed glasses from a young age.


Your issue sounds a lot more serious than mine. What I seem to have is a developing cataract (or two). Oddly, when filming a scene I can see what is going on better through the viewfinder than by observing directly. Actually that is good, I think, for that one task.