At First Sight

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Viridian
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Re: At First Sight

Postby Viridian » Wed Feb 18, 2015 2:53 pm

I think I know where to take this story. It's not an amazingly unique approach, but something I think hasn't really been used in depth before.
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cnelson566
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Re: At First Sight

Postby cnelson566 » Sat Feb 21, 2015 9:48 pm

Depth. Heh. :D

water_bug_62208
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Re: At First Sight

Postby water_bug_62208 » Sun Feb 22, 2015 7:25 am

I'm usually not into Quicksand Stories such as this... Quicksand Stories featuring a damsel in distress that are melodramatic are what I enjoy reading... and, even with the melodramatic stories, I usually don't care for a rescuer, be it male or female, coming along. That said, you certainly did a very impressive job with this story to make a storyline usually of no interest to me most interesting. It was indeed a good read.

Thanks for sharing!


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