Quicksand Fans

I think I know where to take this story. It's not an amazingly unique approach, but something I think hasn't really been used in depth before.

Depth. Heh.

I'm usually not into Quicksand Stories such as this... Quicksand Stories featuring a damsel in distress that are melodramatic are what I enjoy reading... and, even with the melodramatic stories, I usually don't care for a rescuer, be it male or female, coming along. That said, you certainly did a very impressive job with this story to make a storyline usually of no interest to me most interesting. It was indeed a good read.

Thanks for sharing!