The Final Adventure
Posted: Mon Apr 27, 2015 6:32 am
Linda Stuens had just gotten home from her college graduation ceremony. She had a master's degree in wetland biology. And on the outside, she appeared to be a normal 22-year-old college graduate. But on the inside, she had a secret fascination with quicksand.
This fascination had started two years ago, when she was walking home, and saw one of her classmates waist-deep in a mud pool. She got the stuck girl out, and continued walking home, where she began to browse different sites than she normally would.
Now, she wanted to experience the thrill of true quicksand, the type that sucks people down to their doom. So, she started looking at a map for a good sinking spot. Finally, she found it: an area called Director's Paradise, where a lot of movie quicksand scenes had supposedly been filmed. So, she got in her car and drove to the site.
When she got there, she was feeling kind of warm; after all, her graduation ceremony had been that morning, and it was now 1 PM, and it was early in the summer. So, she stripped down to just her bikini. Seeing no one else around, she headed down to the mud's edge. Taking a few steps back, she ran and leaped into the mud, immediately sinking to her lower thighs. As the mud's pressure quickly enclosed her legs, Linda got excited. But, she wasn't quite ready for sexual reactions to the mud yet. The sudden jump into the mud gave her fairly big boobs a lot of motion. As the mud slowly climbed her legs, she started calming down a bit more, listening to the bubbling of the swamp. She was so entranced by the bubbling that she didn't notice that she sank right up to her womanly area until true mud started seeping into her panties and got down to her sexual areas. Suddenly, waves of pleasure started to come to Linda, breaking the trance. After a few more seconds, the waves of pleasure turned into a thunderous orgasm. Orgasmic waves crashed over her as if she was being swept away in a tsunami. She started screaming with pleasure, and subconsciously took her bikini off, letting her boobs hang free. The sudden movements caused her to sink deeper, and slowly the orgasm faded away. By then, she was waist-deep in the quicksand at Director's Paradise. The added pressure on her body resulted in more waves of pleasure through Linda, but not quite an orgasm. She relaxed for a few minutes, slowly letting herself calm down. Then, a thought came across her mind: What if I can't get out? Will I be stuck here forever? Will I die here? She was so focused on these thoughts that she didn't notice herself sinking deeper, until the mud started lapping the bottom of her boobs. Then, fear was replaced by pleasure as another orgasm flew through her senses, Linda once again screaming her pleasure to the entire swamp. The orgasm lasted vastly longer than her first one, nearly a minute. Then it started to fade as she got to shoulder deep. Now, she once again realized how much danger she was in. She was so deep in the mud that getting out on her own was now impossible. Now she realized why the directors had been forced to abandon this place over 40 years ago: it was just too dangerous, coupled with the decline in quicksand popularity. So, she started to try to free her hands from the muck that she just couldn't. Trying to pull her arms out had just caused her to sink to her chin. She knew she only had a few minutes left on Earth, so she tried her hardest and eventually got her arms to move in the mud. Wanting to spend her last minutes in pleasure, she started rubbing her boobs with her hands, and then it happened. A massive orgasm hit her like a freight train, overriding her survival instincts and replacing all thoughts about getting out with thoughts of how great that it felt. But this pleasure only lasted ten seconds, as the movement caused her to sink deeper, and Linda held her breath and tilted her head back to look at planet Earth one last time. Scraping the mud from her mouth for a second, she shouted her last words: "Today the world loses a great scientist to her own sexual pleasures!" And with that, she let herself sink under, the pressure of the mud causing one last orgasm, and seconds later she released her last breath, letting herself succumb to the mud. A few minutes later, the mud was completely still, but churned up where Linda had been. Other than that, her car and clothes were the last signs of Linda. The end.
I have been putting off writing QS stories for a few months because I was more entirely focused on trains. But, there was that one small corner of my mind where QS ruled. I have also been reading some stories to understand how to write better (most notably the 2009 story, "When I'm gone". I did my best to not oversexualize stuff in this story. Linda has a realistic amount of orgasms (as opposed to the more than 250 orgasms in "Big Breasts Can Be Deadly"). I read all of the feedback I get on these stories. I also listen to the feedback as much as I can, and I am always open to comments.
Thanks for reading, 101927700.
This fascination had started two years ago, when she was walking home, and saw one of her classmates waist-deep in a mud pool. She got the stuck girl out, and continued walking home, where she began to browse different sites than she normally would.
Now, she wanted to experience the thrill of true quicksand, the type that sucks people down to their doom. So, she started looking at a map for a good sinking spot. Finally, she found it: an area called Director's Paradise, where a lot of movie quicksand scenes had supposedly been filmed. So, she got in her car and drove to the site.
When she got there, she was feeling kind of warm; after all, her graduation ceremony had been that morning, and it was now 1 PM, and it was early in the summer. So, she stripped down to just her bikini. Seeing no one else around, she headed down to the mud's edge. Taking a few steps back, she ran and leaped into the mud, immediately sinking to her lower thighs. As the mud's pressure quickly enclosed her legs, Linda got excited. But, she wasn't quite ready for sexual reactions to the mud yet. The sudden jump into the mud gave her fairly big boobs a lot of motion. As the mud slowly climbed her legs, she started calming down a bit more, listening to the bubbling of the swamp. She was so entranced by the bubbling that she didn't notice that she sank right up to her womanly area until true mud started seeping into her panties and got down to her sexual areas. Suddenly, waves of pleasure started to come to Linda, breaking the trance. After a few more seconds, the waves of pleasure turned into a thunderous orgasm. Orgasmic waves crashed over her as if she was being swept away in a tsunami. She started screaming with pleasure, and subconsciously took her bikini off, letting her boobs hang free. The sudden movements caused her to sink deeper, and slowly the orgasm faded away. By then, she was waist-deep in the quicksand at Director's Paradise. The added pressure on her body resulted in more waves of pleasure through Linda, but not quite an orgasm. She relaxed for a few minutes, slowly letting herself calm down. Then, a thought came across her mind: What if I can't get out? Will I be stuck here forever? Will I die here? She was so focused on these thoughts that she didn't notice herself sinking deeper, until the mud started lapping the bottom of her boobs. Then, fear was replaced by pleasure as another orgasm flew through her senses, Linda once again screaming her pleasure to the entire swamp. The orgasm lasted vastly longer than her first one, nearly a minute. Then it started to fade as she got to shoulder deep. Now, she once again realized how much danger she was in. She was so deep in the mud that getting out on her own was now impossible. Now she realized why the directors had been forced to abandon this place over 40 years ago: it was just too dangerous, coupled with the decline in quicksand popularity. So, she started to try to free her hands from the muck that she just couldn't. Trying to pull her arms out had just caused her to sink to her chin. She knew she only had a few minutes left on Earth, so she tried her hardest and eventually got her arms to move in the mud. Wanting to spend her last minutes in pleasure, she started rubbing her boobs with her hands, and then it happened. A massive orgasm hit her like a freight train, overriding her survival instincts and replacing all thoughts about getting out with thoughts of how great that it felt. But this pleasure only lasted ten seconds, as the movement caused her to sink deeper, and Linda held her breath and tilted her head back to look at planet Earth one last time. Scraping the mud from her mouth for a second, she shouted her last words: "Today the world loses a great scientist to her own sexual pleasures!" And with that, she let herself sink under, the pressure of the mud causing one last orgasm, and seconds later she released her last breath, letting herself succumb to the mud. A few minutes later, the mud was completely still, but churned up where Linda had been. Other than that, her car and clothes were the last signs of Linda. The end.
I have been putting off writing QS stories for a few months because I was more entirely focused on trains. But, there was that one small corner of my mind where QS ruled. I have also been reading some stories to understand how to write better (most notably the 2009 story, "When I'm gone". I did my best to not oversexualize stuff in this story. Linda has a realistic amount of orgasms (as opposed to the more than 250 orgasms in "Big Breasts Can Be Deadly"). I read all of the feedback I get on these stories. I also listen to the feedback as much as I can, and I am always open to comments.
Thanks for reading, 101927700.