Quicksand Fans

Ok I got it. It was a good story, and I like the different paths. Good job!

I missed this when it came out, but it is just amazing! Seriously, this is great. And that's for showing us this, it is the platform I've been looking for with a story I've been working on for about four years. I was going to do it in PDF format, but this looks even better.

Again, great work!

Rusty

Thank you for the feedback. I'm banging my head against another Twine story. This really isn't my forte, and getting my head around the multiple branches (my next one is easily ten times more complex) is pretty hard to manage without significant planning.

Viridian wrote:Thank you for the feedback. I'm banging my head against another Twine story. This really isn't my forte, and getting my head around the multiple branches (my next one is easily ten times more complex) is pretty hard to manage without significant planning.

Looking forward to it!

Viridian wrote:Thank you for the feedback. I'm banging my head against another Twine story. This really isn't my forte, and getting my head around the multiple branches (my next one is easily ten times more complex) is pretty hard to manage without significant planning.

Don't give up! If anyone could something like this off, it's you!!