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Me,Tarzan

Posted: Sun Jul 03, 2016 1:19 pm
by Sparky81
Comments are welcome.

Re: Me,Tarzan

Posted: Sun Jul 03, 2016 5:01 pm
by Viridian
Ha! Nice one. It opens nicely with a MILF-next-door fantasy. Beautifully set up, with the quicksand fantasy weaved in nicely.

Re: Me,Tarzan

Posted: Sun Jul 03, 2016 5:26 pm
by PM2K
That was a truly original take on the usual, and a highly entertaining read to boot. Bravo! :D

Re: Me,Tarzan

Posted: Tue Jul 05, 2016 3:36 am
by quagmire_uk
That was a lot of fun. :D

Re: Me,Tarzan

Posted: Tue Jul 05, 2016 2:10 pm
by Sparky81
Thank you everyone for the kinds words. I'm glad you enjoyed the story.

Re: Me,Tarzan

Posted: Wed Jul 06, 2016 12:28 pm
by sixgunzloaded
Excellent story! A perfect ending too! How many of us has had a similar experience? :lol: Well done, thank you! :D

Re: Me,Tarzan

Posted: Sat Jul 09, 2016 1:11 am
by Rusty Shackleford
That was a real fun read. I echo what everyone else said. Great job!

Rusty

Re: Me,Tarzan

Posted: Mon Jul 11, 2016 3:40 pm
by Sparky81
Thank you again to everyone for their kind words about the story. I have an idea for a second chapter that I may write.