Cleopatra's Bath

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dougiezerts
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Cleopatra's Bath

Postby dougiezerts » Sun Jul 05, 2009 8:06 pm

(I recently read that Cleopatra took mud baths! This inspired me to write this story.
I hope that it doesn't overlap in any way with the other story that was just written about her!)

"Your bath is ready, my Queen," said one of Cleopatra's hand maidens.
"Thank You," she responded.
The two maidens undressed her then undressed themselves. Then the three of them walked into the bath room.
The sunkan tub was ten feet in circumfrance and three feet deep. It was large enough for at least 20 people.
However, it was not filled with water; it was filled with mud. It was a creamy brown-black mud found in an oasis and known for its healing properties.
Cleopatra walked into the mud bath and sat down in it. The two maidens joined her. One girl sat to her left, and the other sat to her right. As soon as they settled themselves, the maidens begam massaging their queen's back. She sighed contentedly.
Their reverie was interrupted by the entrance of a slave.
"Octorus, General of the Imperial Guards, to see you, my Queen," he said.
"Very well. You may show him in."
He withdrew, but came back with Octorus.
She stood up and faced him. She was, of course, nude, but the thick mud caked her like a long dress.
He removed his helmut in respect.
"Good day, my Queen."
"Good day, Octorus."
"I just wanted to go over some troop movements with you."
"All right. Why don't you make yourself more comfortable."
"Thank you."
A few chairs were decide the tub. He sat in one.
"I'd like you to get more comfortable than that, Octorus."
"My Queen?"
"Get in the tub with me!"
This shocked him into silence."
"Haven't you ever taken a mud bath before?"
"No, never. That is, except I had to wallow in mud during my military training."
"Well then, think that you are doing it with a beautiful maiden, rather than with a group of men!"
This made up his mind; he began disrobing.
Meanwhile, her two maidens walked out of the tub. Her first maiden--her favorite--smiled, and Cleopatra smiled back and put her arm around her shoulder.
Stripped down to his pants, Octorus got up. But Cleopatra clastized him. "Take those off, too!"
"Yes, my Queen."
He took the pants off. Then he got into the tub with her.
"Come closer--I won't bite!"
He "waded" over to her.
"Now, settle yourself in."
He lowered himself into the mud, letting it get to his neck.
"That's better! How is it?"
"Nicer than my training, my Queen!"
She laughed. "Now, make yourself useful: Massage my feet."
She lied on her back on top of the mud with her feet towards him. He began massaging them.
"You have nice hands, Octorus."
"You have nice feet, my Queen!"
"Thank you! Now, you may discuss your business with me."
They talked for around fifteen minutes, during which he continued massaging her muddy feet.
"Well, I must be going, my Queen," he finally said.
"So soon?"
He sighed. "Alas, yes. Where are the showers?"
"I have no showers; you'll have to go home like this!" This shocked him, but she let out a laugh. "Just kidding! They're in the back."
He smiled. "You had me, for a moment, my Queen!"
A waiting slave escorted him to the showers. Before he left, he turned to her. "Thank you for the bath, my Queen; it was a real pleasure!"
"The pleasure was all mine. And thank you for the massage."
"It was an honer, my Queen."
He left. She continued to luxoriate in the mud, and her two maidens rejoined her. Meanwhile, a slave picked up Octorus' clothes and returned them to him.

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Re: Cleopatra's Bath

Postby Viridian » Sun Jul 05, 2009 11:24 pm

*waits eagerly for the quicksand scene*
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Re: Cleopatra's Bath

Postby athenebelle » Tue Jun 16, 2015 7:57 am

This reminds me of that one mud bath scene from "Roar" way back when.


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