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Re: The Catacombs
Posted: Wed Jul 04, 2012 3:24 am
by cnelson566
Excellent first story,thanks for this!
Re: The Catacombs
Posted: Wed Jul 04, 2012 7:58 am
by Quicksand_Hex
Very nice! And my french is still good enough to read all the dialouge!
Re: The Catacombs
Posted: Wed Jul 04, 2012 8:49 pm
by water_bug_62208
A very nice story. Sounds like a scene out of an Indiana Jones movie. The background and scene description set your story up quite nicely. It was also nice that Suzette was wearing shorts to show off her legs. Thanks for sharing!
Re: The Catacombs
Posted: Thu Jul 05, 2012 3:17 am
by Viridian
Very well written! I was impressed with the detailed setting. Good work!
Re: The Catacombs
Posted: Thu Jul 05, 2012 3:34 am
by kham
Nicely done
Re: The Catacombs
Posted: Thu Jul 05, 2012 6:58 am
by PM2K
Kudos!
Re: The Catacombs
Posted: Fri Jul 20, 2012 9:59 pm
by spitfirewinds
Fantastic Story! I look forward to more!
Re: The Catacombs
Posted: Thu Aug 17, 2023 3:58 pm
by Pylo
Does anyone know what happened to this story? I remember it was quite good when it first came out but it seems to have been deleted