MadMax359 wrote:the fit is just fine, darling!
and language needs to be precise--- safe is not the same as
A safe
if she can't get out of the shot, it's time for a re-write of the script
what, there's a snake?
and in general, nice reflections
If you can get it on it fits, what does it matter if the odd seam gives a bit here and there.
I'm a great believer in precision in language, having worked with computers for decades you get like that, they don't do ambiguous or fuzzy very well. I remember re-reading an email I'd written once and thinking, that's not an email it's more like a SQL statement, but at least it was clear and concise.
Re-write a script mid-shooting, can't do that, we'll have to wait for her to disappear!
Oh yes, there are definitely snakes, I chuck some in to add a bit of spice now and then.
Ah, the reflections are the work of the AI, sometimes it gets them right, other times it can get a bit weird.
"Well I know you're sinking faster than me and it's not because I'm wearing boots. No, it's because you are standing in the hole I prepared for you yesterday!"
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She looked down admiringly, she'd always been proud of them and now she hoped others would admire them as well. ... If the turned up soon enough that was!
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She was trying to keep still, she didn't think she'd be able to remain like this for much longer, there was too much pressure building!
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"I think the deep spot is here, I can't feel any bottom." ... "What, you think I should just try to struggle through it! I'd heard that was the wrong thing to do. Still, if you say so." ...
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She pressed on, there was no turning back now, but each step just drove deeper into the mud never finding any solid ground!
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