Quicksand Fans

I've been watching a lot of female qs scenes and wondering. How do write a qs scene, any tips on writing these kinds of scenes? Here are some examples.


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HduMyc_dsNE
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8-yeShU7wnI
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3rApK5uEGUs
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YHlQe5QKkqY
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Zl6wp2fXO2s
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=q2eHVwqgEec

PS: How to write scenes like this at the end of a qs scene when a female is rescued?
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uzk7UApRUwk ( go to 1:16 )

If you're just going to write, do not copy what the video producers do.

1) Come up with a believable reason why the subject is near quicksand. Few go looking for it. Fewer find it "just anywhere".
2) Dress them in congruence with the reason they are at that location. Few walk through a forest barefoot and in a bikini.
3) Make their entry into the quicksand both accidental and believable. Few walk into obvious mud pits.
4) If they know they are alone, don't have them waste their breath shouting for help. Struggling is the more likely reaction.
5) Come up with a believable reason why somebody is near enough to rescue them. Introduce the rescuer at the beginning of the story.
6) Let the subject assist in their rescue. They're interested in getting out.
7) Subject and rescuer should be exhausted afterward. Few walk off as if they were in a city park.

If you're writing erotica, then just write what you think everyone else wants.

Are you writing a script for a video or are you writing a story?

Viridian wrote:Are you writing a script for a video or are you writing a story?

My question as well. Writing for a short video such as our producers create is a very different thing. You've got the limitations of what can be put on camera with the facilities they have. Not that pushing the envelope is a bad thing but you need to keep it real if you would like to see it used for anything.

i just write an average story of me myself in quicksand...

My ideas in general qs are:

1) No fear in sinking in quicksand, but full of pleasure and enjoyment.
2) Immortality; I won't die in quicksand, the quicksand will die by me instead lol...
3) Make antagonists think I am actually sinking to my doom- pretending to be scared and begged to be freed from the mire... Or if sunken, grab 'em by their shirts and pull em in...
4) Controlling the quicksand.
5) all victims shall be rescued by me, I'm jealous of seeing the qs taking people <.<

But I just have fun making qs stories... My mind-writing stories is better than my physical typing... I can type up a story well in my mind :/
I can never die in qs, I will enjoy letting the muck caressing me and fill me up.

The comments made on this to date are pretty much spot on.

Trying to more or less reproduce a scene from a clip from a movie means, from a creative point of view, that you are relying on the original to provide backstory, character development, and even the "set up" or backstory within the single episode. This can be done - I do it myself in the psychicworld scenes and some other series - but it can leave the viewer bewildered. That backstory has to be there somewhere or the situation makes little sense, and without character development of some kind the viewer does not tend to care about the outcome.

To write a scene that has any chance of being filmed, just write a synopsis or brief description of what happens. Forget dialogue and detailed screen directions. The actresses (within the fetish industry) do not have time to memorize a script and will do much better by imrov, and details of blocking and on-screen events are the director's business.

Keep in mind that there is also a producer involved. The producer is more or less in charge of the budget and, thereby, has the final say on what gets done and what doesn't get done. Figure the budget for a complete scene at about 200.00 to 300.00, a good deal of which goes to the actress. There is not much left for props and fancy wardrobe. There might be a little more than these figure imply given that a producer might make 150 to 200 scenes a year often using the same wardrobe items, but its still not a large amount per scene.

DamWatts wrote:I've been watching a lot of female qs scenes and wondering. How do write a qs scene, any tips on writing these kinds of scenes? Here are some examples.


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HduMyc_dsNE
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8-yeShU7wnI
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3rApK5uEGUs
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YHlQe5QKkqY
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Zl6wp2fXO2s
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=q2eHVwqgEec

PS: How to write scenes like this at the end of a qs scene when a female is rescued?
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uzk7UApRUwk ( go to 1:16 )