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The Perils of Jolene!

Posted: Fri Aug 19, 2016 4:02 am
by tanya_wam
My latest, and possibly greatest drawing so far, owing to a really superb photo reference. I might add a background later but I'm away now for a week, and time didn't permit. :oops:

So behold... :shock:


Jolene crashed through the undergrowth as swiftly as she could, fearful that her need for speed would give away her position to the natives as the large lush ferns whipped about her lithe body. She desperately needed to get her bearings, and looked for any recognisable path that would lead her to safety.

The faint glimmer of sunlight strobing through the trees overhead caught patches of dry-looking earth between the waving grass and leaves, and Jolene headed towards it. The clearing offered no shelter but the sparcity of foliage meant she could move quietly for a period and hopefully elude her pursuers. She had barely taken a handful of steps from the thicker jungle when her feet suddenly refused to budge. A sudden tight grip held her ankles and slowly, Jolene looked down with mounting fear at what she hoped was not the case.

Her heeled boots had disappeared into the sandy soil, churning into a thick sludge, sticky like glue and dough combined into a viscous trap.

"Quicksand!" she hissed under her breath.

Only it was like no quicksand she had ever encountered or struggled from before. It was much thicker for one, and gurgled like congealing porridge around her shins as Jolene tried to pull them free. At least, if it were any consolation, she would probably sink slower but drowning was rarely the danger. If trapped completely, she would die of exposure or starvation. Or failing that, her pursuers would find her, and eventually pull her free, only to be back to square one again.

Jolene recalled her survival skills. It would be useless to sit back and spread her weight, to pull her legs free on this side of the stretch of quicksand. if nothing else, she needed to traverse it, and use it as a natural trap for the natives, buying her time to get away. Gritting her teeth, she leant forward, the thick gripping sludge rising to her knees as she put her weight on them, hoping the near horizontal inclination of her shins would give some balance and dispersal. With almost infinite slowness, she crawled on her knees, thigh deep through the congealed muck. It was only after a couple of painfully leaden small strides, Jolene realised she was starting to sink, and quicker this time!

She glanced around and saw several vines hanging low over the quicksand. She lunged at the thickest, a few feet away, and as it held in her hands, she tugged herself forward and wrapped her thighs round it. As she began to exert all her strength, she felt it quiver, muscles and sinews contracting and extending evilly under her palms. Every instinct in her was to scream and let go, but that would mean to fall back into the middle of the softening and churned quicksand around her hips!

A harsh hiss behind her chilled Jolene's blood, and slowly, she turned her head to see the open fanged jaws of the green moss snake she had mistaken for the vine, rearing up to strike...


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Re: The Perils of Jolene!

Posted: Fri Aug 19, 2016 5:32 am
by Qsvgitguy
Of all the luck! :shock:

But! Lucky for us! :lol:

Awesome idea and great drawing. :)

Re: The Perils of Jolene!

Posted: Fri Aug 19, 2016 11:54 am
by MadMax359
how will Jolene get out of this one! she'd better, tho, she needs to live to sink again... :twisted:

Re: The Perils of Jolene!

Posted: Fri Aug 19, 2016 12:52 pm
by PM2K
More great art! And the prose is a perfect match for it. Or is that the other way around? Either case, it is fantastic. :D

Re: The Perils of Jolene!

Posted: Fri Aug 19, 2016 8:31 pm
by nachtjaeger
What PM2K just said!

PM2K wrote:More great art! And the prose is a perfect match for it. Or is that the other way around? Either case, it is fantastic. :D

Re: The Perils of Jolene!

Posted: Sat Aug 20, 2016 1:26 am
by water_bug_62208
Nicely done! Great pose for Jolene and she looks sexy in her field attire. I love the depth you have her sexy legs stuck and sunk at, and I like the slight amount of "splashing" happening around her thighs to depict the intensity of her struggles as she pulls, jerks, and strains to free them from the mud's suction and tenacity. The addition of filth on her sweaty, bare skin adds realism to show she's been out in the jungle for several days.

The thickness you depicted in the quicksand matches your description in the story nicely, and that's a great storyline you wrote. And, having the vine turn out to be a snake is a wonderful touch.

Thanks for sharing!

Re: The Perils of Jolene!

Posted: Sun Aug 28, 2016 12:26 pm
by tanya_wam
Blightmere wrote:As always Tanya, fantastic work, and thank you so much ^_^!


Always nice to have a muse and throw some inspirational ideas at me... a bit like throwing a vine to save me from the quicksands of my own indecisiveness! ;)

water_bug_62208 wrote:Nicely done! Great pose for Jolene and she looks sexy in her field attire. I love the depth you have her sexy legs stuck and sunk at, and I like the slight amount of "splashing" happening around her thighs to depict the intensity of her struggles as she pulls, jerks, and strains to free them from the mud's suction and tenacity. The addition of filth on her sweaty, bare skin adds realism to show she's been out in the jungle for several days.

The thickness you depicted in the quicksand matches your description in the story nicely, and that's a great storyline you wrote. And, having the vine turn out to be a snake is a wonderful touch.

Thanks for sharing!


You're all very welcome. As you see above, the basic idea was Blightmere's but as usual I tried to go beyond the basic brief which was to write something about Jolene in really thick quicksand! I combined that with a drawing and came up with the snake idea as the reference was just a woman, a naked gymnast, holding onto a rope - perfect for 'quicksanding'! 8-)

I've bought some new markers while away so might draw in a background to properly finish the drawing. :D