I have attached the story. Please as always I look forward to all feedback.
Thank you.
Me Tarzan: “Truth is stranger than fiction Part One”
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Me Tarzan: “Truth is stranger than fiction Part One”
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Re: Me Tarzan: “Truth is stranger than fiction Part One”
Ooh, interesting!
I did think it a little odd that in your previous story, where the protagonist has a quicksand fetish, that there wasn't much about him actually being turned on when it happened for real, instead the focus was on the plotline of the argument between the two women, of Mrs. C getting the confession out of her. But having this next part go back to that and explore what the protagonist was feeling, even though he doesn't want to admit it... that puts the previous story in a whole new light.
I did think it a little odd that in your previous story, where the protagonist has a quicksand fetish, that there wasn't much about him actually being turned on when it happened for real, instead the focus was on the plotline of the argument between the two women, of Mrs. C getting the confession out of her. But having this next part go back to that and explore what the protagonist was feeling, even though he doesn't want to admit it... that puts the previous story in a whole new light.
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Re: Me Tarzan: “Truth is stranger than fiction Part One”
Thank you for reading! Yes, Mrs. C. was wondering what Ethan was really thinking as Kayla sank. As is turns out Ethan may have been more aroused that he cared to admit. However, there is a reason behind Mrs. C.'s line of questioning. In the next chapter we find out why she pressed Ethan to admit his fetish/fantasy was to see Kayla submerge in the quicksand.
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