K.I.S.S.- Lum Sinks (PG-13)

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K.I.S.S.- Lum Sinks (PG-13)

Postby DJlurker » Tue Aug 21, 2018 7:55 pm

Hello, everyone! Thought it was time to go back to basics, hence the title... :ugeek:

Keep It Simple, Stupid- Lum Sinks
A Urusei Yatsura QS Fan Fiction
by DJlurker

(F, QS, non-fatal)

"This looks like a good spot-tcha..."

Lum Invader nodded in approval as she withdrew her hiking stick from the medium-brown mud. She had already shed her hiking clothes, now clad only in her trademark tiger-striped fur bikini, her feet bare, her long green hair flowing freely. The alien princess then let her stick drop onto the surface of the mud pit, causing a few ripples. (There... that should be in easy reach.)

Taking a few breaths to calm her nerves, Lum invoked her levitation power, rising a few inches off the ground, then floating past where the solid ground ended and the quicksand began. She then stretched out her right foot, which dipped into the mud, being engulfed past the ankle... it felt lukewarm, not really cold at all, though Lum realized the possibility that it might get cold further down, just like in a body of water...

She couldn't wait any longer. The Oni slowly lowered herself down, her other foot entering the mire, making sure she was balanced before she let gravity reassert itself, causing her to sink down to her knees quickly.

"Da'tcha!" she gasped out at her sudden descent, despite having anticipated this result... She held her arms out for balance as the soft mud took her down deeper into its depths, rising up her thighs... leaning back slightly, Lum felt her buttocks come into contact with the moist surface, almost as if she were sitting on the quicksand... that illusion was quickly broken though, as the quicksand's moisture soaked into her panties, then swallowed her hips.

"Oh yes," the Oni princess breathed out at the feeling of the swamp completely encasing her legs in it's soft, moist grip. She wiggled her trapped hips a little, feeling the mud rise to her ribcage as a result of that action, her forearms now resting on the surface. Unfortunately, said legs were starting to get uncomfortably cold, so Lum pulled them up a little, which caused her to ease down further, taking in a breath as the quicksand began to touch the undersides of her breasts...

She was now in a sitting position, her legs bent at a 90-degree angle, her toes still pointed downward. The alien closed her blue eyes and took slow, even breaths to try and calm her heart rate somewhat... Once it no longer felt like her chest was going to burst, she opened her eyes and looked down at the surface of the quicksand, watching it jiggle slightly in time with her breathing.

A smile suddenly came over Lum's face as she did what any smart person would consider unthinkable- place her hands at her sides, before slowly pushing them downward into the muck. Her smile widened as her elbows were consumed, until her arms were pointed straight down. Lum them closed her eyes again as she clenched her hands into fists, feeling the slimy wetness flow between her fingers and squish out of her palms. Then, she started to bend her forearms upward, moving them to a 90-degree angle, the resistance of the quicksand causing her bosom to press slightly deeper into the surface, making her shiver in delight.

Lum was now (seemingly) hopelessly trapped in the quicksand pit, with no way to escape... though her walking stick lay nearby, her arms were too trapped to reach it, as the greenette gently tugged at said arms, listening to the slight sucking sounds that resulted.

But alas, her lower legs were starting to get cold again... so Lum began to slowly scissor them through the muck in a rough bicycle pattern to warm them up a little. She had reached her buoyancy point by now, so she sank no further into the swamp, though the surface continued to jiggle and heave slightly...

"Mmmmm," the Oni moaned in contentment, opening her eyes again, looking down at her bosom, seeing that her nipples had become prominent under her bikini top, which was beginning to become stained brown by the moist mud... Leaning forward, Lum pressed her breasts just a little deeper into the mire's embrace, a little mud slipping into her cleavage as a result, causing the woman to shiver from the sensation...

Leaning back again, Lum closed her eyes and relaxed, feeling her long hair streaming into the mud, a few loose strands being tousled by a slight breeze blowing through the swamp... although nothing could really top the very first quicksand pit she had sunk herself into, this one was in the top five at least... Only one thing could really make this any better, in her mind...

Just then, her tapered ears began to pick up the sound of footsteps, her breathing quickening at the possibility of being discovered... Only for her fear to be swept away as a familiar voice called out to her.

"Hey, Lum... you enjoying yourself?" The alien's blue eyes blinked open as she tilted her head back, seeing a face come into view that she knew all too well...

"Hello there, Darling," Lum responded, her voice husky and barely above a whisper. "Would you care to join me...?"

Upon hearing that, Ataru Moroboshi's face split into his trademark goofy grin...

*The End...?*

So, what do you think? Sometimes, simple is better, right? ;) Not sure if I want to write a continuation or not... 'cause then things might not be so simple... :P
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Re: K.I.S.S.- Lum Sinks

Postby IxelFate » Wed Aug 22, 2018 3:28 pm

“Keep it simple, stupid”? Aww, i thought Lum was going to rock & roll all night and party every day. :(

Jokes aside, great work, as usual. I love it. ^_^

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Re: K.I.S.S.- Lum Sinks

Postby quicksand3D » Wed Aug 22, 2018 3:43 pm

Here's a visual aid for your story *made this for PM2K
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Re: K.I.S.S.- Lum Sinks

Postby DJlurker » Wed Aug 22, 2018 3:48 pm

IxelFate wrote:“Keep it simple, stupid”? Aww, i thought Lum was going to rock & roll all night and party every day. :(

Jokes aside, great work, as usual. I love it. ^_^

Dang it, I KNEW someone was going to make that joke! :P Glad you liked the story, though.

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Re: K.I.S.S.- Lum Sinks

Postby Person 5 » Wed Aug 22, 2018 6:33 pm

Nice story as always!
My DA! With other 1000 sinking pics!
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Re: K.I.S.S.- Lum Sinks

Postby SinkerCutie » Thu Aug 23, 2018 4:43 pm

It's honestly hard for me to tell which stories are which rating...and since I dislike adult content, finding a good story on sites like this is even harder...

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Re: K.I.S.S.- Lum Sinks

Postby DJlurker » Thu Aug 23, 2018 5:36 pm

SinkerCutie wrote:It's honestly hard for me to tell which stories are which rating...and since I dislike adult content, finding a good story on sites like this is even harder...

I tried to keep this one PG-13 rated... Was it successful?

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Re: K.I.S.S.- Lum Sinks

Postby SinkerCutie » Sat Aug 25, 2018 3:37 pm

DJlurker wrote:
SinkerCutie wrote:It's honestly hard for me to tell which stories are which rating...and since I dislike adult content, finding a good story on sites like this is even harder...

I tried to keep this one PG-13 rated... Was it successful?

Yes, but for the future, I'd recommend that you give a rating to the story as well as the title. That way, I don't have to risk reading the more adult stories...


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