Me Tarzan...Was Donna Right continued...

[Sparky81]

“So I’m supposed to believe Kayla had something to with this girl’s death just because Herb reached out for help? Come on Judy.”

“Kayla was the number one sales rep in the entire organization. If Herb was called in before HR it wasn’t a stretch to think he would give them Kayla to save his own ass. He would have no problem telling HR about the “special software”, which was unethical and no doubt illegal, Kayla was using to keep his job.”

“But murder, I don’t think so.”

“Really Ethan, you don’t remember what Kayla told us as she was sinking in the quicksand at the quarry? She smothered George with a pillow. She didn’t have to say that as she was sinking. It didn’t make me want to save her did it? What cold she possibly have gained by saying that. In fact, up to that point, I was going to have you save her before she went under.”

“Nothing, unless she said to hurt you isn’t that right? The three of you have been working together all this time.”

Judy looked away at the floor.

“Yes, we have.”

She drew in a deep breath and continued.

“I told you I was having an affair with George, which was partly true. The affair began with Kayla.”

Did I just hear her right!? She was having an affair with Kaya!

“Kayla and I met at Textil functions. We were both miserable in our marriages. Soon our friendly relationship turned sexual. I had never been with a woman but Kayla was incredible. I fell in love. She came up with this plan where we could get divorced from our husbands and make out quite well. I was supposed to begin an affair with George while Kayla arranged for us to be followed and tracked by a private detective. Once confronted with the affair, Kayla knew George would give in quickly rather than expose the details publicly. He was a kind and generous man who would never do anything to disgrace Kayla, me, or my family.”

Judy took a long sip of her drink and continued.

“The problem was I fell in love with George. Kayla went insanely jealous. We argued and argued while she threatened to expose the whole plan. Before I could figure out what to do, George had his heart attack. Kayla never admitted to anything until the quarry. She was calling your name for help because she knew I wasn’t going to save her, not after the truth about George.”

“That’s why you held me back.”

“Yes Ethan. As Kayla sank and pleaded for help, I wanted her to drown. I wanted all this over. I wanted her gone from our lives. She killed George and was threatening all of us. It was so…freeing to see her slowly sink. When she gurgled your name as she went under I felt all the years of tension drain from my body. Her bubbles puckering up were so satisfying to watch.”
Judy stared at the blank big screen TV as she replayed the episode in her head.

“How do I fit in to all this?”

Judy got up and poured herself another drink.

Several months ago, it seems like years now, Alyssa met Herb at the club. Of course Herb didn’t recognize her. Why would he? There were so many young women over the years. Alyssa quickly seduced Herb and they began to have sex. At some point the idiot must have left her alone long enough to place Spyware on one of his laptops. She gained access to his files.”

“And you went along with it?”

“I told him NO. No way was I doing that to you. He reminded me that I would go to prison right beside him, if I made it that far.”

What the hell does that mean!?”

I was getting restless and fidgeting. Hearing that Alyssa was lying too, my anger was about to explode if she didn’t get to the point pretty fucking quick.

“Alyssa started a dummy business. Something like “IT Consultants.” It was a way to blackmail Herb and launder the money. It stared out at 10,000 dollars a month then slowly increased. When Herb told me, I nearly fainted. It was his idea for me to seduce you into helping. You approach Alyssa, get close to her, and find out about those files and steal her laptop.”

“Ethan, with the high powered people mentioned in those files, how long do you think Herb and I would last?”

Judy paused to take another long sip of her drink and continued.

“The “swimming lessons” were supposed to be my time to get you to help, in any way I could. When I told Herb I just couldn’t do it, he called Kayla. After telling her everything, she showed up right before our last “lesson.” We were fighting about it just as you showed up. After you left we continued to fight. “I’m taking over! Watch yourself Judy; you’ll wind up in that pool out there” she said. I was scared. I know what she’s capable of.”

“That’s when Kayla invited me to her house. I told her about the quicksand which gave her leverage over me.”

Judy nodded in approval. She began to sob quietly.

“Now you know more of why I wasn’t in a hurry to have you save her. I had no idea about the quicksand and how you thought of me. Kayla had that quarry for years. When she told me about what you had said we fought again. She was going to use that against you no matter what. When you saved her, things got worse. Soon after she recovered, she threatened me again. She promised me I would die the way I feared most and she would see to it. I haven’t slept or ate right on months.”

“Alyssa obviously lied as well. Why this present thing with Alyssa? Whose idea was that?”

“Herb, he thought why not let the two meet and see what happens. Maybe they would destroy each other. Alyssa had no idea that Kayla knew she was the blackmailer. Kayla was more than happy to invite her in her home. While she was there, Vincent her thug, searched Alyssa’s apartment. He found nothing useful. Kayla was angry and decided to take her chances and make Alyssa disappear for good.”

“Ya, that never happened.”

“I know Ethan.”

“How the fuck do you know?!” I yelled

Judy smirked at me

“Kayla knows everything. You know that HR connection I told you about? The one that helped Herb with the Peaches problem?”

“Ya?”

“It was Donna Wise.”

I sat on Herb’s couch speechless. My mind was numb.

“Donna was the one that looked into Pattie Sykes personal medical records and found out about her severe peanut allergy. She reported that information to Kayla.”

Judy got up and sat next to me. Sobbing she put her arms around me and held me close.
“I wish this all never happened.”

“Do you know what Kayla is planning now?”

“I haven’t talked to her yet.”

“Alright, you tell her all of us should meet tomorrow at the quarry 1pm, Herb, You, Alyssa, Kayla and me.”

“What do you have in mind Ethan?”

“I think I have solution we all can live with.”

Judy rubbed my leg.

“Do you really think it will work?”

“It’s worth a try.” I smiled.

Judy moved in slow and kissed me. It stared soft and light then I felt her tongue smash into my mouth hard. I took off her top as she lay back. Her large breasts slide to the sides of her body. My hands pulled off her shorts and thong. I quickly undressed. She sat up while I kneeled with one leg on the couch and while my other foot was on the floor. My cock was hard as she began to lick it lightly.

“You know Ethan….I really would sink for you.”

Judy took me down a bit deeper each time her head bobbed. I thrust my hips as she did. Her gagging made me want to go deeper. When she looked up, I could see tears in her eyes as she swallowed to my base, my balls slamming against her face. I pulled out and turned her around. Her plump juicy ass was up as she bent down and turned her head to the side resting on the couch.

“Fuck me hard Ethan.” Judy said breathlessly.

I slide my cock into her wet pussy. As I began to pump her harder and harder she moaned…

“Help me Ethan….I’m sinking….Help...”

Grabbing her hips I went even harder.

“God….I’m….don’t stop….please. Please...” she moaned loudly

Her tits were bouncing against her so hard I could hear the slapping noise. That was it, I couldn’t hold back any longer….

“Judy!”

I felt myself shake as I exploded into her. Pulse after pulse my cock emptied. Judy screamed into the pillow on the couch. When I pulled out she lay back against me.

And NO, I didn’t imagine this. That’s right, I fucked Judy after all these years….

Next Chapter: “The End is in Sight.”

[Sparky81]

Judging by the lack of response this chapter is not winning any awards. Let me know where I fell short with this one?

[IxelFate]

Judging by the lack of response this chapter is not winning any awards. Let me know where I fell short with this one?

I personally enjoyed this part just like the others. The only thing is that I’m more of a lurker here nowadays so I don’t give my two cents very often.

Now, I don’t want to speak for anyone but myself, but I feel like most people just aren’t in it for the “slow” moments like these. My theory is that they’re in it for the sinking sequences and that’s pretty much it. Obviously I don’t know for sure, but it’s a thought.

Please don’t let this discourage you. Please please please keep at it. Your work is incredible

[JSample]

Following up on what IxelFate said, while my immediate "go to" sequences in stories like these are the sinking segments, I definitely appreciate background and transitional material as well as it helps to fill out the characters' personalities. In my own stories I rely heavily upon detailed background information where I feel it's necessary to the progression of the narrative; I figure that if readers see me putting detail into the introductory and transitional non-sinking parts, they'll trust that I'll put just as much detail into the sinking segments as well.

[Sparky81]

Judging by the lack of response this chapter is not winning any awards. Let me know where I fell short with this one?

I personally enjoyed this part just like the others. The only thing is that I’m more of a lurker here nowadays so I don’t give my two cents very often.

Now, I don’t want to speak for anyone but myself, but I feel like most people just aren’t in it for the “slow” moments like these. My theory is that they’re in it for the sinking sequences and that’s pretty much it. Obviously I don’t know for sure, but it’s a thought.

Please don’t let this discourage you. Please please please keep at it. Your work is incredible

Thank you for the compliment, I appreciate it. I tend to agree with your observation. The “slow” parts, the back ground of the story, doesn’t hold interest like a story directly dealing with sinking. I wrongly assume that that reader has read all the previous chapters of my stories which isn’t the case. In this chapter I tried to tie up loose ends and mentioned sinking very little.

Thank you again for your feeback and compliment. I’m happy you enjoy the series. Another chapter is coming soon!

[Sparky81]

Following up on what IxelFate said, while my immediate "go to" sequences in stories like these are the sinking segments, I definitely appreciate background and transitional material as well as it helps to fill out the characters' personalities. In my own stories I rely heavily upon detailed background information where I feel it's necessary to the progression of the narrative; I figure that if readers see me putting detail into the introductory and transitional non-sinking parts, they'll trust that I'll put just as much detail into the sinking segments as well.

Thank you for the feedback. I didn’t think the story would make much sense without detailed back ground. However, I do realize that for some readers it’s not their cup of tea. I suppose the trick is to keep a healthy balance between the two.

[Sparky81]

For those of you still interested, I hope to have the next chapter done this week.

Thanks for reading!

[JSample]

For those of you still interested, I hope to have the next chapter done this week.
Thanks for reading!

Looking forward to it!