Things quickly spiral out of control after a woman receives a strange text for help from her best friend, directing her to the edge of an isolated lake.
I’m a little unsure of this one, its very different from my last story, but its kind of a special story for this month and hopefully it all comes together in the end. Its a little shorter than my last one at 23 pages, and only 8,100 words with a lot of dialog (FYI, the dialog does contain profanity, but I figured under the circumstances anyone would be swearing lol). Feel free to let me know what you think, and thank you for reading!
Pin Pointing A Secret
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Pin Pointing A Secret
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Happy Holidays Y'all!
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Re: Pin Pointing A Secret
Great read. Loved the theme and the twists.
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Re: Pin Pointing A Secret
Viridian wrote:Great read. Loved the theme and the twists.
Thank you so much Viridian! That means a lot coming from someone who wrote the book on story writing

Happy Holidays Y'all!
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