The Catacombs
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cnelson566
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Re: The Catacombs
Excellent first story,thanks for this!
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Quicksand_Hex
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Re: The Catacombs
Very nice! And my french is still good enough to read all the dialouge!
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water_bug_62208
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A very nice story. Sounds like a scene out of an Indiana Jones movie. The background and scene description set your story up quite nicely. It was also nice that Suzette was wearing shorts to show off her legs. Thanks for sharing!
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Viridian
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Very well written! I was impressed with the detailed setting. Good work!
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kham
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Nicely done 
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PM2K
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Kudos! 
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spitfirewinds
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Pylo
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Re: The Catacombs
Does anyone know what happened to this story? I remember it was quite good when it first came out but it seems to have been deleted 
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