Me,Tarzan

Sparky81 · Postby **Sparky81** » Sun Jul 03, 2016 7:19 am

Comments are welcome.

Viridian · Postby **Viridian** » Sun Jul 03, 2016 11:01 am

Ha! Nice one. It opens nicely with a MILF-next-door fantasy. Beautifully set up, with the quicksand fantasy weaved in nicely.

PM2K · Postby **PM2K** » Sun Jul 03, 2016 11:26 am

That was a truly original take on the usual, and a highly entertaining read to boot. Bravo!

quagmire_uk · Postby **quagmire_uk** » Mon Jul 04, 2016 9:36 pm

That was a lot of fun.

Sparky81 · Postby **Sparky81** » Tue Jul 05, 2016 8:10 am

Thank you everyone for the kinds words. I'm glad you enjoyed the story.

sixgunzloaded · Postby **sixgunzloaded** » Wed Jul 06, 2016 6:28 am

Excellent story! A perfect ending too! How many of us has had a similar experience? :lol:

Well done, thank you!

Rusty Shackleford · Postby **Rusty Shackleford** » Fri Jul 08, 2016 7:11 pm

That was a real fun read. I echo what everyone else said. Great job!

Rusty

Sparky81 · Postby **Sparky81** » Mon Jul 11, 2016 9:40 am

Thank you again to everyone for their kind words about the story. I have an idea for a second chapter that I may write.

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