A Helping Hand

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Viridian
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A Helping Hand

Postby Viridian » Sun Sep 27, 2009 8:27 pm

It's been a while, but once again, it's STORY TIME!
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Re: A Helping Hand

Postby jack c » Mon Sep 28, 2009 4:08 pm

Very detailed and well written, as is usual for you. Your sinking descriptions held my attention throughout - this would make a great movie scene, as well. Keep up the good posts. Good to see your work again.
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Re: A Helping Hand

Postby PM2K » Mon Sep 28, 2009 6:33 pm

What Jack said! :D
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Re: A Helping Hand

Postby quagmire_uk » Tue Sep 29, 2009 12:31 pm

An enjoyable read. :)
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Re: A Helping Hand

Postby stevensenechal » Wed Sep 30, 2009 12:03 am

I wondered where you were going with the knifepoint abduction but you used it as a mechanism to simply get their clothes off and have 'rescuers' in the area as well, not bad at all. I really enjoyed the sinking scene and the relationship between the two girls. (Moral of the story: never trust a guy named Steve. :lol: ) Well done Mr. Viridian.
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Re: A Helping Hand

Postby Viridian » Wed Sep 30, 2009 10:13 am

I think by now everyone knows that, in my stories, the clothes come off sooner rather than later :) Glad to see the positive reactions, and hopefully more tales will be spun in the near future.
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Re: A Helping Hand

Postby nachtjaeger » Thu Oct 01, 2009 1:42 am

Nice one! Not just a "plop and sink" but a genuine adventure, with well-developed characters. Well done!
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Re: A Helping Hand

Postby Northerner » Wed Oct 21, 2009 6:11 am

Love your stories man, every one is pure gold quicksand perfection.
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