I originally posted this as an idea in one of the producer threads. It wasn't picked up but I decided to write it out as a story. I've posted it on other forums dealing with other fetishes but I felt that this one was the most relevant. Do be warned though that this story is pretty heavy on the "pleasurable death by quicksand" angle so if that isn't your thing, turn away now.
The Quicksand Report
“Hello viewers! This is Eva Harper with Channel 4 News reporting from the woods just outside of Ivy Creek,” said the gorgeous strawberry blonde. Dressed in a red blouse and tight black skirt with her hair pulled into a bun, the 31 year-old reporter nailed the ‘sexy but still professional’ look. “I’m out here today to hopefully shed some light on a new trend that’s sweeping across the country, and that trend is quicksand. In recent months a growing number of women have wandered into the woods hoping to find a pit of quicksand. Once they find one, these women typically disrobe and wander into the bog, slowly sinking into the pit. Many of these women claim that they experience incredible orgasms while wallowing in the clay. A few have even taken it a step further and submerged completely in the quicksand, never to be seen again. While these women aren’t around to give their testimonies witnesses claim that they experienced the ultimate orgasm while sinking to their deaths. Today I’m going into the forest to find one of these quicksand pits, and hopefully also find a woman about to throw herself into it so I can ask her a few questions.”
“aaaand cut!” Eva’s cameraman Joe stopped the recording and lowered his camera. “Great as always Eva, now let’s meet up with Hannah so we can film the interview.”
Hannah was a curvy brunette intern with tanned skin who worked at Channel 4 News, the only news channel in the small town of Ivy Creek. One night while working late Eva walked in on Hannah jilling herself off to a video of a woman sinking in quicksand. Eva was already working on the quicksand story and instead of punishing Hannah for watching porn at work she convinced her to be interviewed while sinking in quicksand.
“Now you don’t have to go all the way if you don’t want to,” Eva had told her. “We’ll have a rope standing by and when you’re ready we’ll pull you out and continue the interview on solid ground. The audience just needs to see you in a pit getting turned on.”
Eva’s promise was enough to get Hannah to agree. She led Eva and Joe to a quicksand bog she had flirted with a few times in the past so they wouldn’t have to search for one. Eva decided that it was better for the interview if it appeared as if she stumbled upon Hannah by accident and that the two didn’t know each other. Eva and Joe would walk off a couple hundred yards and film the opening segment while Hannah got her safety rope ready and “warmed up.”
As they neared the quicksand pit Eva and Joe heard the sounds of soft moans coming from up ahead.
“Sounds like she’s getting warmed up alright.” Joe said with a sly grin.
Eva smiled, “That’s good. The more enthusiastic she is the better the interview will be.”
As they reached the pit Eva’s smiled quickly turned into a disappointed frown as she and Joe found Hannah already sunk halfway into the pit. Both of her hands were submerged and the bottom of her large tits were already touching the surface of the bog.
Hannah heard the pair approach and opened her eyes. As soon as she saw Eva’s disappointed expression she gave her an apologetic smile. “I’m sorry Eva. I couldn’t… wait. I was…hmmm… warming up… and… the pit…”
“That’s fine Hannah,” Eva said quickly straightening her blouse and adjusting her hair. “We just need to do this quickly before we pull you out. Joe, get the camera ready.”
Joe threw the camera back onto his shoulder and adjusted the focus. Once he was ready he gave Eva a quick countdown and then thumbs up to let her know she was good to go. Immediately Eva snapped back into her reporter persona.
“Alright folks well it looks like we’ve found ourselves a quicksand pit, and it looks like there is someone already enjoying themselves in it.” Eva turned to Hannah and knelt down. “Hello Miss, I’m Eva Harper with Channel 4 News, what’s your name?”
“H…Hannah…” The mud had reached Hannah’s nipples and it was clear the girl was only half present. Her eyes were only half open and the movement of her shoulders made it clear that she was pleasuring herself underneath the surface of the quicksand.
“Well Hannah, I’m doing a story on the erotic nature of quicksand and I was wondering if we could ask you a few questions.” Eva said, hiding the fact that she was annoyed Hannah had jumped the gun.
Hannah’s eyes were closed but she managed to eke out a reply, “mmmm…uhhhh…s…sure…”
“So Hannah, have you ever been in a quicksand pit before?” Eva asked.
“y…yes… Several times…” was all Hannah could manage to say.
“And have you ever gone all the way under?”
“No…no… just… to my neck…”
By this point Hannah’s tits had vanished beneath the surface and the quicksand was resting on her upper chest. Eva was clearly unhappy with the responses she was getting so she decided to cut her losses and pull Hannah out of the bog.
“Alright Hannah it looks like you’re almost up to your neck already. Let me just find a rope so we can pull-“
“NO!” Hannah shouted. She was still working her pussy but she opened her eyes and looked directly at Eva. “No, I’m doing it this time… I’m going… all the way.”
Eva looked at Hannah wide eyed, “You mean…?”
Hannah closed her eyes and tilted her head back as the quicksand neared her chin. “All those other times… they were just teasing… if I get out now… it will all be for nothing.”
Eva was speechless, which was very rare for a reporter. She didn’t know how to respond.
“Knowing that I’m sinking… to my death… makes it so much better… so much more erotic.” Hannah’s ears sank beneath the quicksand and only her pretty face was still visible. “I want to die. I NEED TO DIE! Oh… OHHHH… AHHHHHHH!!!!” Just as she reached her climax Hannah disappeared beneath the mud. For a few moments several bubbles came to the surface where she was but after a minute the bubbles ceased and Eva knew Hannah was gone.
Eva was dumbstruck for a minute. Her promise that Hannah didn’t have to go all the way was the only reason she agreed to do this. Eva had seen how hot Hannah would get when she was just thinking about playing in the mud. Did the added thrill of sinking to your death really make the experience that much better? She snapped to her senses and turned back to Joe, who was also stunned but still rolling.
“Did you get all of that?” Eva asked urgently.
“Yea, every bit.” Joe reassured her as he stopped the recording, “It’s definitely hot but it’s far from a full interview.”
“I know,” Eva stood up and began to chew on her manicured nails, a bad habit she took up whenever she was stressed and needed to think. “Plus if I come back empty handed and with news that we lost an intern Mr. Normandy will have me deep throating his cock for a month.”
Eva thought about what to do next. She looked at the quicksand pit and her thoughts were filled with Hannah’s orgasmic final moments. Eva had never been turned on by the idea of sinking into a pit of quicksand but she had thought about it several times as she worked on this story. To her it always seemed kind of like slipping into a warm bath. Definitely not a bad sensation but could it really feel as good as Hannah made it out to be? And could the added thrill of sinking to your death really make it that much better? Eva stopped chewing on her nails and made up her mind. It was her job as a reporter to find the answers to difficult questions, and right now she couldn’t think of a question more difficult than this.
“Ok Joe, I’ve got an idea. I’ll finish the report myself.” Eva said confidently.
Joe raised his eyebrows in surprise. “So you’ll go into the pit?”
“Yes,” Eva answered, “I’ll strip down and sink into the pit. As I go down I’ll describe the experience to the camera, give the viewers a firsthand description of what it feels like.”
“Ok, sounds good.” Joe replied as he adjusted a few settings on his camera. “When do I pull you out?”
Eva grinned. “You don’t.”
Joe nearly dropped the camera, “What?”
“Didn’t you see Hannah?” Eva asked sternly as she placed her hands on her hips. “She said that knowing she was sinking to her death made the thrill much better. If I’m going to get the full story here I have to have the same experience she had. That means I have to go all the way.”
Joe was still shocked, “But, b-but,"
Eva practically growled at Joe "Look, we need a story and in case you haven’t noticed we don’t have any other girls out here lined up to sink.”
Joe sighed, “Alright.” He conceded. He knew Eva well enough to know that when she was set on a story there wasn’t anything you could do to change her mind.
Eva smiled and began to unbutton her blouse. “Thanks Joe, you’ve been a great camera man. And tell everyone in the studio goodbye for me and Hannah. I’m sure they’ll understand why we couldn’t do it in person.” Eva removed her blouse and tossed it onto the nearby pile of Hannah’s clothes. She didn’t know what was going to happen to them but it didn’t matter that much now. Eva slid out of her skirt and tossed it aside as well. She continued with her white lace underwear until she stood in front of Joe and the camera completely naked.
Eva positioned herself so she was directly in between Joe and the bog, so that he could get a good shot of both her naked body and the quicksand. She took a second to compose herself and accept the fact that she was going to die. “Alright Eva, this is it,” she thought to herself, “You’re big, final story. Just make it a good one and try to enjoy it. You won’t get another.” Once she was ready she nodded to Joe who gave her another quick countdown before rolling again.
"Well folks it seems like we were a bit too late to get a full interview out of Hannah, but don’t fret. I’ve decided that I’m going to finish this story myself, which is why I’m currently naked.” She motioned to her nude figure. “I’m going to sink into this quicksand bog and describe the entire experience to you. Now according to Hannah there is a big difference between simply wallowing in the bog and going all the way. To make sure that I’m able to give the best description possible I’m going to sink all the way under in the quicksand, and I’m not coming back up.” Eva paused to let the information sink in. “That’s right everyone, I’m going to die in this quicksand pit! This will be my last report for Channel 4 news, now let’s make sure it’s a great one!”
Eva turned to the bog and slowly crept towards it. She paused for a moment at the edge. She had already resigned to her fate but she still wasn’t quite sure of what she was getting into. She closed her eyes, took a deep breath, and took one large step forward into the quicksand pit. Eva let out a small shriek as her leg immediately sank up to her mid-calf. She took a second to regain her balance and then moved her other foot forward to join the first. Joe had made his way to the other side of the quicksand pit so that Eva was facing the camera.
“Well I’ve taken my first few steps into the bog and my first impressions are pretty nice.” She said to the camera. “The mud feels nice and cool around my feet, and it’s very soft.”
Eva squirmed her feet around to get a better feel for the pit. She knew that at this point she could still get out if she wanted to, but she had already made a commitment to go all the way, and she wasn’t about to back out now. Slowly Eva began to sink deeper and deeper into the quicksand. As her knees began to sink below the surface she turned back to the camera.
“I seem to be sinking rather slowly. That’s good because it should give me more time to enjoy the experience. After all, I can only do this once.” Eva chuckled.
Eva began stroking her pussy with her left hand licking the fingers on her right. She may not have been a quicksand fetishist like Hannah but if this report was going to kill her than she would make damn sure she got off a few times in the process. Just as the quicksand was halfway up her thighs she took her right hand and inserted two moist fingers into her cunt.
Eva smiled at the camera, “Looks like I’m just about warmed up, which is good because the quicksand is getting close to my hips. According to my research once the quicksand reaches your waist you are past the point of no return. Without a rope or someone to help you out the only way you can go is down.” Eva looked down at the pit that was slowly consuming her and gave a warm smile. “Interestingly enough the mud is actually starting to feel rather warm, and I feel a slight tingling sensation all over my legs. It must be the minerals in the mud.” Eva closed her eyes. “Mmmmm. The quicksand has gone from just feeling good to feeling quite pleasurable.”
Eva continued to finger herself and now her left had had begun caressing her breasts. She was starting to get into it when her vagina slipped below the mud. Suddenly her eyes went wide open and she let out a long soft gasp, as though an exceptionally large cock suddenly entered her. Her breathing became more rapid
“Oh” was all Eva could manage to say to the camera for a moment. Her pussy was now on fire, in a good way. The tingling sensation she had felt on her legs was a thousand times better on her already aroused crotch. This felt better than any lover she had ever had, and she had been with a lot. Joe cleared his throat and Eva snapped out of her euphoric trance. She took a moment to compose herself before looking back at the camera, however her hands were still glue to her snatch and her breathing was quick.
“It seems… the mud has… reached my… oh… vagina.” Eva said, struggling to maintain her professionalism. “It’s… unlike anything… I’ve… *pant*… ever felt. It’s feels… good… so good!”
Within seconds Eva’s sex had disappeared completely beneath the mud and her hips were slowly sinking beneath the surface. She thought back to her research. This was it, the point of no return. If she wanted out she would have to do it now. But she didn’t want out. She wanted more. The deeper she went the better her pussy felt. It was as though she was being slowly wrapped in a warm cocoon while being pleasured by the most skilled lover she had ever known. Eva wanted to see how far these sensations would take her, and if she had to die to find out then so be it.
Just as the mud reached her belly button Eva exploded into an orgasm. She threw her head back and let out a long moan as a wave of bliss rode through her whole body. As the pleasure subsided Eva’s wits slowly returned to her and she suddenly remembered that she was on camera. She looked at Joe with an embarrassed smile. She had been nude on camera before but had never done anything this sexually overt.
“As you can see once the mud reaches your ‘nether regions’ it feels extremely good.” She said sheepishly. Her stomach fell below the surface the quicksand made its way to her lower chest. “Now I’m all the way up to my chest, far past the point where I could get out of here. And I must admit that Hannah was right. Knowing that I’m sinking to my doom is adding an extra thrill to the occasion.” After a few more seconds Eva’s tits were beginning to dip into the mud. It seemed that once her center of gravity went below the surface she began to sink faster. “Well folks it looks like I’m almost done. In conclusion, death by quicksand… is a great way to go!” Eva resumed her fingering beneath the surface and the feelings in her pussy felt better than ever. She threw her head back and began to desperately try to reach another orgasm before going under.
As Eva’s tits became fully submerged, her breathing turned into panting. She was getting close. In a few more seconds the quicksand enveloped her neck and ears. Now only her face was visible and Joe had repositioned the camera to be directly above her. She opened her eyes and gazed into the lens.
“This is… Eva… Harper with….oh… Channel 4…huh… news. Signing off! Oh… OHHHH!” Just as Eva’s last orgasm hit her she submerged beneath the mud. Several bubbles made it to the surface but after a few seconds they ceased.
Joe stopped recording and began rushing back to the van as fast as possible. The footage he had captured was pure gold and he was eager to edit it as soon as possible.
That night Eva’s final report aired and brought in record ratings. Within a week more than a dozen women from Ivy Creek ventured into the woods seeking the same fate as Hannah and Eva. Eventually national news outlets replayed the report and the Quicksand sinking phenomenon became a full blown sensation.
The Quicksand Report (Erotic, Fatal, Multiple Submersions)
-
- Posts: 25
- Joined: Mon Aug 06, 2012 5:36 am
-
- Posts: 81
- Joined: Thu Sep 01, 2011 6:47 pm
Re: The Quicksand Report (Erotic, Fatal, Multiple Submersions)
Wow. Just… … wow.
I’ve read erotic quicksand snuff before, but this: the dialogue, the motivation, the casualness, the anticipated sense of finality. You made it come together like no author ever did. Really, the world may not be ready for this level of sheer, terminal eroticism, since more authors need to have heroines jump in and glub glub glub their way to oblivion in eager, desperate, sincere ecstasy.
Please tell me you have more in mind. A sequel? A series of standalones set in the same world? An escalating quota for more fatal submersions per scenario? Anything?
I beg of you.
I ORDER THEE!!!!!!!!!
I’ve read erotic quicksand snuff before, but this: the dialogue, the motivation, the casualness, the anticipated sense of finality. You made it come together like no author ever did. Really, the world may not be ready for this level of sheer, terminal eroticism, since more authors need to have heroines jump in and glub glub glub their way to oblivion in eager, desperate, sincere ecstasy.
Please tell me you have more in mind. A sequel? A series of standalones set in the same world? An escalating quota for more fatal submersions per scenario? Anything?
I beg of you.
I ORDER THEE!!!!!!!!!
-
- Posts: 25
- Joined: Mon Aug 06, 2012 5:36 am
Re: The Quicksand Report (Erotic, Fatal, Multiple Submersions)
Wow, wasn't expecting a response like that! Well, I may do more stories like it but I have no idea when or what the main theme will be. Quicksand isn't my main kink so this story was a little out of the norm for me. Basically the only thing I can give you is a definite "maybe." But I'm glad you enjoyed it so much!
- PM2K
- Always Remembered
- Posts: 10386
- Joined: Wed Apr 15, 2009 6:14 pm
- Location: Eastern Ontario
Re: The Quicksand Report (Erotic, Fatal, Multiple Submersions)
Amazing stuff!
I like this a lot. Looking forward to seeing more of your fiction in the future.
![Very Happy :D](./images/smilies/icon_e_biggrin.gif)
- sinkwithme
- Posts: 148
- Joined: Mon Oct 05, 2009 5:29 pm
- Location: Connecticut
Re: The Quicksand Report (Erotic, Fatal, Multiple Submersions)
As good as any story ever posted here! Thanks for sharing it! It "worked" for me!!
-
- Posts: 14
- Joined: Sun Nov 21, 2010 2:43 am
Re: The Quicksand Report (Erotic, Fatal, Multiple Submersions)
It was very "special and straightforward" but so well-detailed I enjoyed it from A to Z. ![Smile :)](./images/smilies/icon_e_smile.gif)
![Smile :)](./images/smilies/icon_e_smile.gif)
-
- Posts: 17
- Joined: Sat Nov 04, 2023 7:04 am
Re: The Quicksand Report (Erotic, Fatal, Multiple Submersions)
I love this story! I now rank this up there with the Final Field Trip as my two favorite stories in this entire forum! Great work! Keep it up!
Who is online
Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 2 guests