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Me,Tarzan
Posted: Sun Jul 03, 2016 7:19 am
by Sparky81
Comments are welcome.
Re: Me,Tarzan
Posted: Sun Jul 03, 2016 11:01 am
by Viridian
Ha! Nice one. It opens nicely with a MILF-next-door fantasy. Beautifully set up, with the quicksand fantasy weaved in nicely.
Re: Me,Tarzan
Posted: Sun Jul 03, 2016 11:26 am
by PM2K
That was a truly original take on the usual, and a highly entertaining read to boot. Bravo!

Re: Me,Tarzan
Posted: Mon Jul 04, 2016 9:36 pm
by quagmire_uk
That was a lot of fun.

Re: Me,Tarzan
Posted: Tue Jul 05, 2016 8:10 am
by Sparky81
Thank you everyone for the kinds words. I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
Re: Me,Tarzan
Posted: Wed Jul 06, 2016 6:28 am
by sixgunzloaded
Excellent story! A perfect ending too! How many of us has had a similar experience?

Well done, thank you!

Re: Me,Tarzan
Posted: Fri Jul 08, 2016 7:11 pm
by Rusty Shackleford
That was a real fun read. I echo what everyone else said. Great job!
Rusty
Re: Me,Tarzan
Posted: Mon Jul 11, 2016 9:40 am
by Sparky81
Thank you again to everyone for their kind words about the story. I have an idea for a second chapter that I may write.