Lazing on a Sunny Afternoon

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Lomax
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Lazing on a Sunny Afternoon

Postby Lomax » Tue Apr 28, 2009 6:46 pm

This one has undergone a bit of a re-write. First time round I got a bit carried away and dragged out the ending into inconsistent territory. I've now cut it back.
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Re: Lazing on a Sunny Afternoon

Postby quagmire_uk » Wed Apr 29, 2009 9:46 am

Very nice! :)

Of course, I imediately become curious and want to read the old version where the ending went into inconsistent territory, heh.
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Re: Lazing on a Sunny Afternoon

Postby Lomax » Thu Apr 30, 2009 8:25 pm

quagmire_uk wrote:Of course, I imediately become curious and want to read the old version where the ending went into inconsistent territory, heh.


As far as I know, it's still available on Deep Sinking if you do a bit of searching.
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Re: Lazing on a Sunny Afternoon

Postby Viridian » Tue May 05, 2009 8:14 am

I have a copy of the original version. I definitely agree that this is more refined. Thanks for the post :)
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Re: Lazing on a Sunny Afternoon

Postby Lomax » Tue May 05, 2009 7:18 pm

Viridian wrote:Thanks for the post.


After my appalling behaviour last year towards you and others, I'm just grateful that you're still speaking to me.
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