Lazing on a Sunny Afternoon
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Lazing on a Sunny Afternoon
This one has undergone a bit of a re-write. First time round I got a bit carried away and dragged out the ending into inconsistent territory. I've now cut it back.
In order to make an apple pie from scratch you first have to create the universe.
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Re: Lazing on a Sunny Afternoon
Very nice!
Of course, I imediately become curious and want to read the old version where the ending went into inconsistent territory, heh.
Of course, I imediately become curious and want to read the old version where the ending went into inconsistent territory, heh.
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Re: Lazing on a Sunny Afternoon
quagmire_uk wrote:Of course, I imediately become curious and want to read the old version where the ending went into inconsistent territory, heh.
As far as I know, it's still available on Deep Sinking if you do a bit of searching.
In order to make an apple pie from scratch you first have to create the universe.
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Re: Lazing on a Sunny Afternoon
I have a copy of the original version. I definitely agree that this is more refined. Thanks for the post
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Re: Lazing on a Sunny Afternoon
Viridian wrote:Thanks for the post.
After my appalling behaviour last year towards you and others, I'm just grateful that you're still speaking to me.
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