Pin Pointing A Secret

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Theo
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Pin Pointing A Secret

Postby Theo » Thu Apr 01, 2021 6:10 am

Things quickly spiral out of control after a woman receives a strange text for help from her best friend, directing her to the edge of an isolated lake.

I’m a little unsure of this one, its very different from my last story, but its kind of a special story for this month and hopefully it all comes together in the end. Its a little shorter than my last one at 23 pages, and only 8,100 words with a lot of dialog (FYI, the dialog does contain profanity, but I figured under the circumstances anyone would be swearing lol). Feel free to let me know what you think, and thank you for reading!
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Re: Pin Pointing A Secret

Postby Viridian » Fri Apr 02, 2021 3:24 am

Great read. Loved the theme and the twists.
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Theo
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Re: Pin Pointing A Secret

Postby Theo » Sat Apr 03, 2021 5:45 am

Viridian wrote:Great read. Loved the theme and the twists.


Thank you so much Viridian! That means a lot coming from someone who wrote the book on story writing ;) I love your artwork and what few stories of yours I’ve read so far. I read “Echoes of War” a little while back and so far that’s my favorite of yours.
It’s not so much that I like to write, I just like to tell stories.


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