Quicksand Fans

Fate and circumstance beset a struggling young actress as she sets out on an offhand hike down a strange trail that’s long been closed for some reason.

This is actually the second story I ever wrote in the spring of 2020, and my first grim, quicksand horror fiction story. Another long one, with a relatively short sinking scene. Part of the story was inspired by my own experiences on walks I’ve been on over the years around where I live (except for the deep mud part unfortunately).

As always, thank you for reading, and feedback is appreciated!

Absolutely thrilling read. You've really honed your craft of building your world and tying up the loose ends.

Bravo

Viridian wrote:Absolutely thrilling read. You've really honed your craft of building your world and tying up the loose ends.

Thank you so much again Viridian! I did put a quite a few hours in editing and attention to detail so I'm glad to hear it paid off

ghostofmyeyes wrote:Bravo

"Thank you... thank you!" Said Theo, bowing modestly in appreciation