The Goldilocks Experiment
Posted: Fri Sep 03, 2021 8:50 pm
An experienced Sinker becomes a little too obsessed with creating the perfect mixture of quicksand to sink herself in.
Not a sequel to my first story, “A Backyard Experiment” (perhaps someday), but I guess you could say it’s a “spin-off.” Originally written in the summer of 2020, I at first thought it was too short (1,500 words) and too similar to my first story to be worth posting. But then, a few months ago, I suddenly came up with some new ideas. So, I set out to rewrite it, and the result was an almost all new 7,600 word story (I think I only used 500 words from the original lol).
Please enjoy and let me know what you think, and as always, thank you for taking the time to read my story!
Not a sequel to my first story, “A Backyard Experiment” (perhaps someday), but I guess you could say it’s a “spin-off.” Originally written in the summer of 2020, I at first thought it was too short (1,500 words) and too similar to my first story to be worth posting. But then, a few months ago, I suddenly came up with some new ideas. So, I set out to rewrite it, and the result was an almost all new 7,600 word story (I think I only used 500 words from the original lol).
Please enjoy and let me know what you think, and as always, thank you for taking the time to read my story!