This is my second story on here and it follows a similar pattern but this one features two girls as opposed to one. Once again sorry for any spelling mistakes and I hope you enjoy.
Jennie often ended up in weird situations but she didn't know what to think of this one. Here she was after her work day at the new pleasure or peril theme park opened in Japan with her co-workers who had dared her to try the quicksand pit attraction. Being eager to please, despite her nervousness and fear, she found herself approaching the kiosk and buying a ticket for the attraction. She looked out at the quicksand pit, a large square of light brown muck walled off on three sides with various people at different states of sinking. After she recieved her ticket she walked over to where participants removed their items which they didn't want to sink with and placed them in trays. She was then left approaching the pit, wearing a pair of black suit trousers that went to her ankles and a white long sleeve button up shirt, still tucked in with the top two buttons undone. She stepped onto the pit.
As she walked further onto the pit all that she could hear was the "slap, slap, slap," of her barefeet on the sandy surface, her heartbeat and her somewhat heavy breathing. "I feel like I should have started sinking by now," Jennie said as she looked behind her and saw the imprints of her feet on the quicksand's surface. She rocked on the balls of her feet and looked down to notice the quicksand rising up and swallowing her toes. She stepped back to more solid ground and looked at her toes, now painted brown by the mucky sand. "That feels pretty nice actually," she said as she wiggled her toes. She stepped forward to the now slightly wetter patch of ground, letting the quicksand take her feet and suck them down until it reached the bottom of her trousers. "It feels so thick and waterlogged," Jennie said, "it's sucking on my feet." She giggled as she attempted to move her feet around in the thick brown slop. She tried to lift her right foot out of the quicksand, only to realise it was stuck in place. "That's weird," Jennie said as she pulled on her left foot with the same result, "I can't get my foot out." She continued the left to right rythm, pumping her legs in the quicksand, but this only caused her to sink deeper, the muck now flooding her trouser legs. "Well it doesn't look like that's gonna help," Jennie said confused, "what if I try thi - oh god." She had tried to stand on her tip toes to raise herself somewhat but this had the opposite effect and she went from midway up her calfs to her knees in the quicksand. Panic was beggining to set in.
She looked down at her mired legs and began to regret her eager to please nature. She looked back to the entrance to see her colleagues had left, leaving her struggling in the muck in front of a few waiting attraction participants. She had turned to trying to jump out but this also didn't work. For every attempted jump upwards she only settled deeper below the surface which had now claimed her knees and was looking to pull her down to her thighs. She tried to move her legs to see if she could feel the bottom but noticed that the sticky mire held her legs in place. "No, no, no this is bad," Jennie said as she wiggled her legs in attempt to move them, unconciously pushing herself deeper as she unknowingly worked with the quicksand to sink her lower thighs in the muck. "Um could I please have some help here?" Jennie asked in a raised tone to the worker at the kiosk. The female worker looked at her with a smile, took off her sandals and walked over to her. She wore the park's uniform red polo shirt adorned with it's logo and a pair of black shorts that went midway down her thighs. "Hi I'm Marie, how can I help you?" The worker said. "I'm stuck and I kind of want to get out now," Jennie said, the quicksand now at her upper thighs and still rising. "I'm really sorry but that's not possible, when you enter an attraction you're there until it's over," Marie said, still holding a smile, "if it adds any re-assurance, I hear it can become a rather sensual experience, it's not called pleasure or peril for no reason." "B - but how deep is it?" Jennie asked, the quicksand now at her slowly warming crotch. "I don't know, you'll probably find out," Marie said, "now I should probably get out of - oh for God's sake." Marie looked down at where her feet once were only to see the quicksand rising over her ankles. Marie was out of her comfort zone.
Jennie couldn't help but laugh at this rather ironic occurrence, despite the quicksand still rising up around her crotch. "Oh for god's sake I just got a pedicure so that's ruined and this is eating my time on break and now - are you even listening?" Marie said to a seemingly arroused Jennie. "I'm sorry but I guess they don't call it pleasure or peril for nothing," Jennie said, swaying her hips and in turn letting them sink into her sucking captor. "Thats great and all but your movements are only pushing us deeper, I'm already up to my knees and it doesn't seem like I'm sinking any slower." Marie said, begining to panic, "just pulling my legs isn't working." Jennie, the quicksand now encroaching on her waist, had swapped her sense of panic for enthrallment with the sinking Marie, so much so that she wanted her to sink deeper. "What if you stand on your tip toes and try to pull your legs out then," Jennie said to Marie who was now up to her lower thighs. "I guess it's worth a try," Marie said, "here goes nothi - oh god no, no, no." Marie sank uncontrollably, the quicksand taking not just her thighs but her hips, making her and Jennie now level. "If we get out of here alive I'm gonna kill you," Marie said. "You're the one who gives tickets to this attraction," a now panicking again Jennie responded, "anyway what if we try pulling each other out." It seemed their only option.
The women grasped each others hands, Jennie noticing Marie's soft palms and painted nails. "I love the colour on your nails," Jennie said, trying to avoid worsening the panic. "Thanks, I've got the same on my toes, not that you can see them now," Marie responded, playing along, "now try to pull me out." Jennie pulled hard and attempted to pull with her whole body, but it only ended up sinking her more. "Wait stop you're only sinking us both more," Marie said panicked. Both girls were now up to their chests in the quicksand and were begining to consider that they may not escape. They both tried to get out again, pushing down on the still mostly solid ground around them. Suddenly, almost in sync, their arms were sucked into the quicksand as their bodies dropped, leaving both up to their armpits in the muck. "I can't get my arms out," Jennie said, panicking profusely. "Neither can I," Marie responded. Their panic led to further struggles, driving their shoulders beneath the muck, then their collarbones, leaving them trapped kneck deep. "Seeing as we may not get out of this I may as well act on my feelings," Marie said, "I think you're really hot and I want to go out with you." Jennie smiled and responded "I would've said yes, but it's not like we're under yet, we can still shout." Marie nodded and the girls starting shouting. "HELP US PLEASE, WE'RE STUCK IN THIS QUICKSAND," they shouted in unison. As the quicksand rose up their necks tears began to form. They continued to shout but they realised it was futile, the only other antendees were a group of American girls who didn't understand them. They tilted they're heads back so only their faces could be seen, framed by the quicksand's surface, and then they submerged.
They both endured what felt like an eternity of holding their breathes, and then they felt air on their skin. They were in a room underneath the pit, they were still alive. After a cleanup and a regaining of their senses, the girls walked out, Jennie asked "so when is that date then?" As they felt the outside air. "Are you free now?" Marie asked, "because I know a place." They walked out of the park, hand in hand.
Pleasure or peril, the quicksand theme park attraction
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Re: Pleasure or peril, the quicksand theme park attraction
I like your idea of a quicksand theme park attraction. Check out my take on the subject:
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