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For Your Pleasure (A Quicksand Novella)

Posted: Fri Jun 28, 2024 10:06 am
by GTaggert
This story was first written back in March and posted in this forum. Since then, I went back and made some rather extensive re-writes and was preparing to repost it when the outage happened. I then decided to add some illustrations using AI, and you'll see some in the pdf. The ones I really wanted to put there never worked right; apparently the AI image generator I use doesn't understand the notion of an indoor quicksand attraction.

When I saw the post about a Quicksand Theme Park attraction, I made a few final refinements to the story (which has since ballooned to novella size) and wrote 3 sequels. I'll post those sequels in due time, but for now here is the first part of the For Your Pleasure quicksand saga. Enjoy!

Re: For Your Pleasure (A Quicksand Novella)

Posted: Mon Sep 23, 2024 5:41 pm
by Solrex
Fantastic, loved reading it. Wish I could pay 1500$ to have a lifetime ticket there.

Re: For Your Pleasure (A Quicksand Novella)

Posted: Tue Sep 24, 2024 4:30 pm
by GTaggert
Glad you liked it! By all means please continue with For Your Pleasure II, III, IV, and V! :)

Re: For Your Pleasure (A Quicksand Novella)

Posted: Wed Sep 25, 2024 12:01 pm
by GTaggert
Solrex wrote:Fantastic, loved reading it. Wish I could pay 1500$ to have a lifetime ticket there.

Thanks very much. Be sure to check out the sequels, For Your Pleasure II, III, and IV

Re: For Your Pleasure (A Quicksand Novella)

Posted: Thu Sep 26, 2024 4:06 pm
by KTG_42
Creative! I rather liked the theme here and the writing flows well.