The Catacombs

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cnelson566
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Re: The Catacombs

Postby cnelson566 » Wed Jul 04, 2012 3:24 am

Excellent first story,thanks for this!
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Quicksand_Hex
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Re: The Catacombs

Postby Quicksand_Hex » Wed Jul 04, 2012 7:58 am

Very nice! And my french is still good enough to read all the dialouge!
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Re: The Catacombs

Postby water_bug_62208 » Wed Jul 04, 2012 8:49 pm

A very nice story. Sounds like a scene out of an Indiana Jones movie. The background and scene description set your story up quite nicely. It was also nice that Suzette was wearing shorts to show off her legs. Thanks for sharing!
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Re: The Catacombs

Postby Viridian » Thu Jul 05, 2012 3:17 am

Very well written! I was impressed with the detailed setting. Good work!
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Re: The Catacombs

Postby kham » Thu Jul 05, 2012 3:34 am

Nicely done :)
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Re: The Catacombs

Postby PM2K » Thu Jul 05, 2012 6:58 am

Kudos! :D
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Re: The Catacombs

Postby spitfirewinds » Fri Jul 20, 2012 9:59 pm

Fantastic Story! I look forward to more!
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Re: The Catacombs

Postby Pylo » Thu Aug 17, 2023 3:58 pm

Does anyone know what happened to this story? I remember it was quite good when it first came out but it seems to have been deleted :(
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