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Failed crossing

Posted: Sun Apr 26, 2020 2:09 pm
by ghostofmyeyes
The broad bank of loose clay silt is softer and grippier than she'd imagined when she set out to skinny dip in the river. Her arms become stuck when she tries to pull a leg free, and she feels a shift as the mud around her comes alive with bubbling and gurgling. Her thighs steadily sinking, a sensation of helpless slow freefall takes hold of her whole body, and she looks nervously at the bank, hoping her friends arrive soon...

Re: Failed crossing

Posted: Sun Apr 26, 2020 5:10 pm
by mudmanic2012
Great Work :D

Re: Failed crossing

Posted: Tue Apr 28, 2020 10:52 am
by duuudeization
Too bad she be smiling, but very well done!

Re: Failed crossing

Posted: Wed Apr 29, 2020 6:25 am
by MadMax359
duuudeization wrote:Too bad she be smiling, but very well done!


maybe she thinks you found her and are going to rescue her?