Maddie's stroll (Submersion, Grim)

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Maddie's stroll (Submersion, Grim)

Postby Fgtgh » Tue Feb 04, 2025 4:58 pm

First storie in a while, not to long. Sorry if any spelling errors and hope you enjoy.

It was a quiet Friday afternoon, the sky clear but the air still with a subtle chill. Maddie, a UK college student on the last year of her studies, sporting a well proportioned face and body, along with somewhat curly light ginger hair, had decided to take the afternoon off, using it as an afternoon to go for a walk and clear her head. She left her house sporting a black, crop-top, overlayed by a grey zip up hoodie and waterproof jacket, a pair of old, semi-baggy blue jeans and a pair of old Nikes with white trainer socks, and set off towards the beach. As she walked through the small town and down to the beach the air began to grow warmer, prompting her to unzip her jacket and hoodie as she walked onto the clear empty beach, letting the air blow over her figure. As she walked further along the beach the soft sand became more difficult to walk on. "It's warm enough so I may as well just take these off," she remarked taking off her right shoe and sock, then the left and rolling up her jeans level with her ankle, and found the going much easier. She strolled along the beach, enjoying the feeling of the soft sand on her feet, the soles of which now lightly coated in sand. This was short lived however as the beach came to end with a small cliff face. "I'm sure there's more than this," she said, walking to the end of the rock face onto the damp sand. She could see more beach around 100 yards past the rock face, but going past it seemed to risky as that would mean walking through the sea. With this thought a small wave lapped over her feet, prompting her to rush back to dry land, causing her to see a path through the woods. "That seems as good a way as any I guess," Maddie said, slightly cringing as she put her wet feet into her trainers, forgoing socks to keep them clean, and setting off through woods.

After a few minutes she made it to the rest of the beach, which turned out to be decieving. From afar it looked like normal beach but up close it looked waterlogged, dark and in a way muddy. "Oh well, won't stop me now I'm here," Maddie remarked, keeping on her shoes due to the muddy appearance of the sand. The wetness became immediatley apparent as she walked onto the beach and as she went further even more so. At the midpoint of the beach the surface became spongy and somewhat bouncy. "This is definitly different," she said, "A bit sinky as well, and sticky." As she said this her trainers settled and inch into the sand, and didn't budge much when she tugged on them, which she continued to do until her right foot came out of the shoe. "Oh shit!" Maddie exclaimed, her bare-foot in the air, and her trainer slowly sucked under, "This isn't good." She gingerly put her foot onto the sand, feeling the muddy, waterlogged sand sag underneath it. She went to move her left leg to move away from the area but her left foot also shot out, and the weight transfer caused her right to sink slightly to just below the ankle, soon joined by her left. "Oh for God's sake what is this?" She said, feeling the sand begin to suck her feet deeper, her ankles now under the surface. She attempted to wrench her feet out but this only drove her deeper, her jeans now being stained a sandy brown. After a few minutes of this she was up to her knees and had come to a grim realization. "I think this might be quicksand," she said, her breath becoming shaky as she looked down at the quicksand begining to pull her thighs down into the muck. In that moment all she could do was frantically panic, driving her thighs midway under the surface. She calmed herself after a minute and remembered a geography lesson she had once had on natural hazards, one of which was quicksand. In the lesson her teacher, a younger woman called Ms Linda, had made them do a demonstration on how you would extract yourself from quicksand. "So remove footwear if possible, already done," Maddie scoffed, "Remove any heavy objects like coats or bags," she said removing her jacket and hoodie, "And then you ju - oh God." The quicksand had reached her crotch and pushed against it, the moistness and pressure causing a sense of pleasure. As the sensation increased her hips seemed to gain a mind of there own, rocking back and forth in the mire, increasing her pleasure, but also her depth. As she went deeper the quicksand fully claimed her jeans, in turn causing it to flow inside, further stimulating her crotch. The shock caused her to lean back, allowing it to flow in through there too. This caused her ass to become coated in the mucky sand, and the quicksand to push against her hole. She had little time to revel in this sensation however, as the added weight caused her too sink deeper. "Oh God this is bad, I'm like super deep now," she said, looking down at the quicksand now around the base of her chest. She attempted to move her legs to try and work herself out, only to find her legs almost entirely locked in place, and any movement causing the quicksand to pulsate and pull her deeper. Worse yet, her feet were being tilted down and her once spread toes squished together, hastening her descent. "HELP, HELP PLEASE, I'M STUCK IN QUICKSAND!" Madie yelled, almost up to her armpits in the quicksand, her arms out either side, giving her an idea. "Here goes nothing I guess," her voice shuddering as she put the palms of her hands on the surface either side of her, getting ready to try and push. She pushed down with all her might, and for a second her body rose about an inch, only for the quicksand to greedily stop her efforts and pull in her arms, then flow over her shoulders. Now neck deep, she begin to feel the soft but firm constriction, and the feeling if the quicksand sucking more of her under. "Please can someone help me," she said knowing no one would hear it. "This isn't fucking fair," she said, tears welling in her eyes as the quicksand reached her chin. In response she tilted her head back, her face now framed in the surface of the malicious beach. "Well I guess this it, goodbye world," Maddie said, seconds before she sank under completely, sucumbing to the suffocating quicksand.

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