Hi, this is my first story so I'm sorry for any errors, spelling or otherwise. Hope you enjoy.
The sign had peaked Jeanette's interests in an instant. It read "A true quicksand experience." Before she could even look around at any of the other attractions at the event she found herself carried by legs which had a mind of their own. As she approached the attraction she began to see it more clearly; a large square walled off on three sides, filled with a light brown, sandy looking material. People in various depths of the supposed quicksand were dotted about the pit, struggling to seemingly either sink deeper or to attempt to break free from their mucky captor. Jeanette approached the worker at the kiosk of the attraction and purchased one ticket to experience the attraction, as well as being told to remove any items which she didn't wish to get muddy from her person.
Jeanette's dark figure was now clad only in her tight denim booty shorts and cropped tube top as she walked through the gate onto the inconspicous square of muck, now free of the people which she witnessed sinking before. The quicksand felt cool and squishy beneath her barefeet and yeilded ever so slightly under her weight, leaving imprints in the pit behind her. As she began to aproach the center of the square the ground began to feel more waterlogged and sank slightly more under her. "When am I supposed to start sinking then?" Jeanette muttered, moving her feet around on the surface of the quicksand. As she then placed one of her feet down it was sucked into just over the ankle, her other foot meeting the same fate as she placed it besides the other to regain balance. "Now that's more like it," she said, wiggling her toes beneath the surface of the muck. It oozed between them and she could now more clearly feel the true texture of the quicksand, a mud-like substance which seemed to be mixed with some type of sand. It felt better than she expected.
She began to pull her leg up to extract her right foot but noticed that it stayed firmly in place, her left foot sinking about an inch deeper. She then pulled on her left foot, only for the same thing to occur to her right foot. She continued this futile struggle until most of her calves had been sucked in and the quicksand was almost up to her knees. "So this is how the quicksand works huh, wonder how I get out, guess I'll find out later," she said, pumping her legs softly until her knees had been consumed by the pit and the sands began to approach her thighs. As she sank deeper it became harder for her to move her legs, her feet being restricted, but her toes still wiggling in the thick, wet mass which drew her in. "You're really nice and thick aren't you quicksand, but just how deep are you?" She said as she pumped her legs, her thighs becoming stained with wet slop as she sank deeper, sinking up to the middle of her toned thighs in the deep, sucking quicksand. She began to recall an article she read about how quicksand was only around as deep as the thighs to the waist of the average person. "I should be able to feel the bottom if this pit then soon," she said as the quicksand began to eat at her booty shorts and her toned ass.
The quicksand began to encompass her crotch and begin to suck her nether regions into it's wet grasp. She began to feel a wave if warmth come over her, causing her to let out a soft moan and curl her toes, now deep under the surface of the quicksand. Her nipples began to harden against her tube top as she swayed her hips, pushing her crotch deeper into the muck and causing a sense of arrousal to continue growing. As she pushed harder she began to moan harder and subltely slid her hand under her tube top to play with her now perky nipples. Her swaying drove her deeper into the sandy mud, her hips now submerged in the thick mass as it aproached the waistband of her shorts. She eventually managed to surpress the feeling throughout her body as the quicksand pulled the last of the her denim shorts into it's depth and secured her waist below the surface.
Jeanette noticed her depth and began to attempt to extract herself from the quicksand, pulling on her legs below the surface. They were almost entirely locked into place and refused to budge to her resillient efforts. "Why can't I just pull my legs out of this stuff?" Jeanette questioned as the hungry quicksand approached her navel. Noticing the futility of her efforts she began to struggle more, forcing her deeper into the waterlogged mass of muck. "How is this allowed at a public event if someone can't even get ou - woah!" Jeanette exclaimed as she was suddenly pulled in so deep that the quicksand was just below her breasts. She began to panic and waved her arms while shouting "Help me please, I can't get out," to the girl at the kiosk as she gave out tickets to a group of girls, but none of them could hear her. She quicksand began to pull her breasts below the surface, causing the sandy muck to spill into her tube top as she's pulled down to her armpits. In an attempt to escape her muddy prison disguised as a fun attraction she placed her hands beside her and began to try and pull herself out. "Oh yes it's working," she said as she stopped sinking momentarily. "I can finally free myse - Oh shit no no no !" Jeanette shouted as her arms plunged into the gripping quicksand, causing her to sink even deeper up past her collarbone. "Help me please I'm being serious I'm stuck in this quicksand!" Jeanette yelled as her kneck was slowly eaten by the hungry quicksand. "Please can anybody help me?" Jeanette wimpered as she tilted her head back, "I don't want to die in quicksand, please." A single tear rolled down her cheek as her face was sucked into the gurgling quicksand. All she could do was hold her breath.
After what felt like an eternity she felt the pressure of the quicksand break and her body drop down onto a soft mat. She opened her eyes to see a sign which read "well done, you survived quicksand" as she realised she was in a large room underneath the pit. "So this is how they save people huh, real smart," Jeanette muttered as she looked for the exit so she could experience it again
Quicksand theme park attraction
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Re: Quicksand theme park attraction
Just read it, I love the idea of having a quicksand attraction theme park. Both safe and alluring. I hope more characters will join in the attraction.
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Re: Quicksand theme park attraction
Omg, somebody please make this a reality! 

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