The Road She Shouldn't Have Traveled

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The Road She Shouldn't Have Traveled

Postby Theo » Mon May 17, 2021 12:53 am

Fate and circumstance beset a struggling young actress as she sets out on an offhand hike down a strange trail that’s long been closed for some reason.

This is actually the second story I ever wrote in the spring of 2020, and my first grim, quicksand horror fiction story. Another long one, with a relatively short sinking scene. Part of the story was inspired by my own experiences on walks I’ve been on over the years around where I live (except for the deep mud part unfortunately).

As always, thank you for reading, and feedback is appreciated!
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Re: The Road She Shouldn't Have Traveled

Postby Viridian » Mon May 17, 2021 2:50 am

Absolutely thrilling read. You've really honed your craft of building your world and tying up the loose ends.
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Re: The Road She Shouldn't Have Traveled

Postby ghostofmyeyes » Mon May 17, 2021 3:54 pm

Bravo :D
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Re: The Road She Shouldn't Have Traveled

Postby Theo » Tue May 18, 2021 12:47 am

Viridian wrote:Absolutely thrilling read. You've really honed your craft of building your world and tying up the loose ends.


Thank you so much again Viridian! I did put a quite a few hours in editing and attention to detail so I'm glad to hear it paid off :D
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Re: The Road She Shouldn't Have Traveled

Postby Theo » Tue May 18, 2021 12:54 am

ghostofmyeyes wrote:Bravo :D


"Thank you... thank you!" Said Theo, bowing modestly in appreciation :D
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