The Road She Shouldn't Have Traveled

[Theo]

Fate and circumstance beset a struggling young actress as she sets out on an offhand hike down a strange trail that’s long been closed for some reason.

This is actually the second story I ever wrote in the spring of 2020, and my first grim, quicksand horror fiction story. Another long one, with a relatively short sinking scene. Part of the story was inspired by my own experiences on walks I’ve been on over the years around where I live (except for the deep mud part unfortunately).

As always, thank you for reading, and feedback is appreciated!

[Viridian]

Absolutely thrilling read. You've really honed your craft of building your world and tying up the loose ends.

[ghostofmyeyes]

Bravo

[Theo]

Absolutely thrilling read. You've really honed your craft of building your world and tying up the loose ends.

Thank you so much again Viridian! I did put a quite a few hours in editing and attention to detail so I'm glad to hear it paid off

[Theo]

Bravo

"Thank you... thank you!" Said Theo, bowing modestly in appreciation